Het guys My new website (see signature) was lanched only a few weeks ago. since then I have been very busy getting the software registrered on a few hundred sharewaresites and already see some 50-10 downloads a day.
Please help me improve my sales page
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Het guys
My new website (see signature) was lanched only a few weeks ago. since then I have been very busy getting the software registrered on a few hundred sharewaresites and already see some 50-10 downloads a day.
I do however keep having a feeling that my copy needs a lot of work.
Its only my second website and its my fist time writing copy for one.
On top of all this english isn't my first language at all (Im form Denmark)
Any critique or advise would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks in advance
My new website (see signature) was lanched only a few weeks ago. since then I have been very busy getting the software registrered on a few hundred sharewaresites and already see some 50-10 downloads a day.
I do however keep having a feeling that my copy needs a lot of work.
Its only my second website and its my fist time writing copy for one.
On top of all this english isn't my first language at all (Im form Denmark)
Any critique or advise would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks in advance
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