Need help increasing conversions for online sales letter
I own a product in the muscle building niche and I'm basically looking to further increase my conversions. Here's the sales letter for my product >> http://tinyurl.com/c7tzbu3
Currently, this copy converts best with my newsletter subscribers (I'm assuming most sales letters convert best with a list of subscribers). My PPC conversions are very low and organic search conversions are not impressive either
I've written this letter myself after split testing several versions, and this one converted the best compared to the previous 3 versions.
However, I think it can do better than what it's converting at now.
Any useful tips/suggestions for improvement would be greatly appreciated.
I feel like I'm missing/overseeing something as I've spent a lot of time writing and tweaking this letter, so I would really love to get other experts honest opinion on it.
It would be really helpful if after reading the copy, you could tell me what would convince YOU the most to purchase the program?/ Why would you purchase it?
And also, tell me why would you NOT buy the program? & the biggest reason why you would not?
Additionally, if you have any experience with video sales letters, do you think my conversions would be higher if I converted this letter into a video sales letter?... since it is kind of long.
Thanks
-Adi
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