Trying This Again Please Let Me Know What You Think Critique 2.0
Some background info: The page is very plain + title may seem long but I've tried headline variations and more visually appealing page templates but this is the only one that's converted.
Difference is I've decided to change the content of the copy. (Any subhead ideas are welcome
Here is the page and thank you in advance:
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