Help me out with a critique..

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I wanna say right off the bat that I'm looking for some help with a thread which I have here on the WF ... I'm not sure if this is allowed but I couldn't find anything that prohibited it - but I'm sorry if I'm wrong.

You can see the link in my sig.

I know it's probably a lot less glamorous than a lot of you guys are used to but I could use some help all the same. I bought a graphics package today from Nathan here in the hopes that I could use some of these to spice up my post a bit. I've also had a read through the sticky of question to ask ones self before asking for a critique.

Thing is, I sit down to write and I can't think of anything better than I already have there. It's odd as I'm usually pretty creative but I'm just drawing a complete blank on this one.

I'm on the verge of just paying out to get someone to do it - but honestly that would frustrate the hell out of me because I at least want to take a crack at it myself.

I'm going to record and add a video in the coming days which will of course go somewhere near the top. I'm also going to add a buy now button and an "add me to skype" button - once I figure out how to add html to a forum post that is. Also plan to throw a few of the graphics I bought in there. Other than all this - I just don't know. To be honest the whole thing has be intensely frustrated - never ever before have I been drawing blanks when it comes to writing something creative.

Any advice would be appreciated but I guess what I'm looking for is some ideas to be batted around to get my mind kick started.

I'm passionate about my product and really think I offer some good genuine value to anyone who purchases from me - but I don't think I convey this well enough in the post. I don't want to appear like I'm trying to oversell my service or talk it up - it just is what it is and that's a good, genuine service.

Thanks once again WF
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