Would appreciate some critique for 'Product Creation' copy
I am releasing a product creation related..ahem...product, next week, and would appreciate some insight into the copy.
I am not a copy writer, but I do enjoy the psychological side of selling. With this launch, I want to keep things clean by not making the sales letter too hype-y, while attracting interest, of course.
So I have tried to keep the design clean, and have focused on myself for branding (rather than the product), since this is the first in line of other products on product creation. I think it would make sense to emphasize on me and my history, since I am relatively unknown here.
This product will be available on Warrior Forum next week, just so it gives you an idea about the marketplace. I am trying to target beginner and intermediate IM product creators (and those who want to venture into this).
Would appreciate you thoughts on this, thank you so much! I have looked at Chris Ramsey's guidelines in the sticky, and have changed the sales letter to reflect that (where I can), but again, I am too close to the project, and might be a little biased!
Thanks again,
Neeraj.
The sales letter is available on:
milliondollarquestions. (gap) org/Sales-Letter.htm
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