You Have A Gun To Your Head - Which ONE Would You Choose?

by Rezbi
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I know this has been killed to death but...

I need to make a seriously serious decision.

I'm looking for a course, or a book in the format of a course. If you have no idea what that means, you don't need to reply.

You see, I've been told by some heavy hitters that my copy is pretty good. But I want to be better than pretty good and improve my game further.

So...

If you had to choose one course on copywriting and one course on DR marketing, which would you choose.

Please keep in mind I have a sh** load of courses and books and may even have the one you mention. And I might ask you questions to prove you speak from experience and not just parroting everyone else.

With all that harshness outta the way...

What would you recommend?
#choose #gun #head
  • Profile picture of the author shawnlebrun
    if budget is a concern... john carlton's kick ass copywriting secrets. Most likely you have that one...

    if budget isn't of concern... gary bencivenga's retirement dvds.

    a more obsolete one that many people haven't heard of before, but it probably gave me the best lessons on both copy and marketing... are eben pagan's altitude, gurumastermind, and his other stuff. more mindset related, but SO relevant.
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    • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
      Originally Posted by shawnlebrun View Post

      if budget is a concern... john carlton's kick ass copywriting secrets. Most likely you have that one...

      if budget isn't of concern... gary bencivenga's retirement dvds.

      a more obsolete one that many people haven't heard of before, but it probably gave me the best lessons on both copy and marketing... are eben pagan's altitude, gurumastermind, and his other stuff. more mindset related, but SO relevant.
      Really? Eben Pagan's guru stuff, for copywriting?

      I never thought of that.

      And, no, money is not an issue. I just want to take my writing to the next level.

      As far as marketing is concerned, I've studied so much I can literally see the big gaping holes most businesses have in their marketing.

      I'm referring to the type of stuff that's not taught in the usual material.

      One thing I've realised is that, despite what most people say and think, there are secrets in marketing and copywriting that only the best know.

      And you have to do a lot of digging and get the most expensive closed-door stuff to access them.
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      • Profile picture of the author copyassassin
        Originally Posted by Rezbi View Post


        I'm referring to the type of stuff that's not taught in the usual material.

        One thing I've realised is that, despite what most people say and think, there are secrets in marketing and copywriting that only the best know.
        Why not pony up the money to get mentored by the big boys?

        I've seen your posts for years, and advice you've given....

        ... I'm not sure there is a manual for what you are looking for.

        I think your best bet is find a mentor who'll lower their pants and let you take a look. And you'll need to lower your pants and have him take a look.
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  • Profile picture of the author shawnlebrun
    yeah, definitely eben's stuff took my copy to the next level... because you really dig deep and get into the motivations and mindset of WHY people buy.

    Plus, the doctor of copy, craig clemens, he's got a TON of copy info in there that more than paid for the course. craig is one of the best alive, and since he doesn't have a course, per se (he's also in print persuasion masterclass with eben) this is the next best thing.

    heck, just craigs copy info in the gurumastermind course was priceless... and it's step by step as well. eben is more mindset and craig is more nuts and bolts, but it's helped me a lot.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
    Craig Clemens?

    Never heard of him. Does he have a website?

    Sounds like someone I should look into if he's as good as you say.
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    • Originally Posted by Rezbi View Post

      Craig Clemens?

      Never heard of him. Does he have a website?

      Sounds like someone I should look into if he's as good as you say.
      I met Craig Clemens at Yanik's first Underground in Washington, D.C. in 2005...at that time he was an affiliate (I think he was an Affiliate Manager) for Eben Pagan/David DeAngelo. He was/is a relatively young guy, but seems to be doing very well - he's always posting pictures on FB of his travels and adventures around the world. I guess I should contact him again and see what he's up to...we seemed to hit it off pretty well back in 2005.
      BTW, at that event I was seated next to Dan Kennedy, who was an ATTENDEE, and not a presenter. And he did not seem the least bit grumpy, in case anyone was wondering...
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  • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
    Originally Posted by Ken_Caudill View Post

    Buy Joe Sugarman's Triggers. You'll be glad you did.
    I've probably got everything Joe ever did.
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    • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
      Originally Posted by Ken_Caudill View Post

      Why go out for hamburger when you have steak at home?
      You know those recordings where the top guys talk 'off the cuff'? The ones where they don't hold back and 'chat amongst friends'?

      That's what I'm after. You know, the fly on the wall stuff.
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  • Profile picture of the author MikeHumphreys
    Originally Posted by Rezbi View Post

    I know this has been killed to death but...

    I need to make a seriously serious decision.

    I'm looking for a course, or a book in the format of a course. If you have no idea what that means, you don't need to reply.

    You see, I've been told by some heavy hitters that my copy is pretty good. But I want to be better than pretty good and improve my game further.

    So...

    If you had to choose one course on copywriting and one course on DR marketing, which would you choose.

    Please keep in mind I have a sh** load of courses and books and may even have the one you mention. And I might ask you questions to prove you speak from experience and not just parroting everyone else.

    With all that harshness outta the way...

    What would you recommend?
    Hey Rezbi,

    Good question.

    Here's my advice to you.

    1. Write a lot of copy. Different formats... different media... different target markets. The more you write copy, the easier it becomes to take what you already know and put it into action. It makes it even easier to take new tactics or techniques you learn and put THOSE into action.

    2. Read winning sales copy consistently. I try to read at least one control piece every day. I may not have the time in a given day to read the entire piece but I do read something every workday. It's a great way to get your creative juices flowing.

    3. Consider getting mentored by a veteran copywriter or copywriting coach. There's enough threads in this forum that explain the reasons why so I'm not going to waste time repeating it here. IMHO, the best answers you'll get will be delivered by the best questions you can come up with for your mentor.

    4. Develop some copywriting allies. Network and find some other working copywriters at the same level (or slightly better). Make it a point to talk with them by Skype/email/etc... help each other out with objective critiques, sympathetic ears, or a strong verbal butt kicking when needed.

    Coursewise... like a few other people mentioned already, I'm not sure you need another course to study. You already have a pretty strong copywriting and marketing foundation.

    On Ebay, sometimes you can find old John Carlton seminars like his "License To Steal" one.

    To date, the best copywriting course I've ever seen is Clayton Makepeace's Quick Start Copywriting System. It contains a mind-boggling amount of training materials... copywriting-wise, I can't think of anything not covered in it.

    Best of luck,

    Mike
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    • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
      Originally Posted by MikeHumphreys View Post

      On Ebay, sometimes you can find old John Carlton seminars like his "License To Steal" one.

      To date, the best copywriting course I've ever seen is Clayton Makepeace's Quick Start Copywriting System. It contains a mind-boggling amount of training materials... copywriting-wise, I can't think of anything not covered in it.

      Best of luck,

      Mike
      Already have JC's "License To Steal". It's one of the first sets I bought. It's a good one.

      I like practical advice like that.

      I need to get Clayton Makepeace's Quick Start Copywriting System. I've seen you mention it before. I'm beginning to think it's probably got everything I'll need.

      As far as 'secrets' go, they do exist. I've got some obscure courses which teach things I haven't seen anywhere else.

      These are courses which were literally meant only for clients. They're only available because the clients decided to release them.

      Usually you have to get them second hand. And they're rare.
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  • Profile picture of the author maximus242
    Ill tell you what Rezbi,

    At your level the best thing you can do is to study hundreds of sales letters in depth. Thats where you will see the real secrets, in the work itself.

    Its the difference between studying Michaelangelo's writings on artwork and going down to Capella la Sistine and studying it for yourself

    I think you are being suckered into buying more crap with the idea that "there is a secret"

    There isnt one. Spend time mastering what you already know. Its now HOW MUCH you know but the DEPTH of your mastery that makes all the difference.

    For example Clayton shows in depth how he makes world beating controls step-by-step. Why isnt everyone suddenly writing world beating controls like him? Because it takes time to master. You dont just read words in a book and suddenly know how to surf.

    Same is true with copy.

    The basic formula has been unchanged

    Get Attention
    Build Interest
    Channel Desire
    Motivate them to Action

    If you do those four things, you have a sale. Its not HOW MUCH you know but HOW MASTERFUL you are at it.

    As they say in New York

    "How do you get into Carnegie Hall? Practice, practice, practice."

    I think you'd be better off doing a couple thousand split tests and learning from that than you would chasing the Gurus tails

    Experience is the ultimate teacher
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    • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
      Originally Posted by maximus242 View Post

      I think you are being suckered into buying more crap with the idea that "there is a secret"
      I'm not being 'suckered' into anything. No one's telling me I need more stuff.

      I know what I need and probably want.

      I've written a few things. If you've been on courses or bought any marketing related material, it's possible you bought because of copy I wrote.

      I know for definite at least one person on the WF has bought through my copy.

      The only problem I have is the majority of my work is anonymous. In a way it's good because I get more dosh for being behind the scenes.

      But I can't use them as testimonials. Which can be a bummer.

      I'm thinking I should start offering critiques. I know there's a heck of a lot of stuff which could do with it.
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  • Profile picture of the author arfasaira
    Have you tried looking in Dan Kennedy, marketing courses, Vincent James, Jeff Paul, How To Marketing, Copywritng, and Consulting Products ? I've got a ton of stuff from Jeff Paul and Dan Kennedy that is hard to find elsewhere...

    What about Drayton Bird's stuff? I'm sure you have everything...

    I know Jason Fladlien gets some awesome copywriting and marketing stuff every once in a while - Jason Fladlien Products
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  • Profile picture of the author shawnlebrun
    hey rezbi,

    I actually commend you for wanting to learn more about the craft.

    can you suffer from info overload? sure, but it also shows me that you're
    willing to continuously learn and get better... which i think ALL great writers
    strive to do.

    hell, i've been copywriting for 12 years and have written well over 500 letters,
    but i still have that inner yearning and drive to keep reading, learning, and
    soaking in more.

    I do find that it sometimes backfires... in that it all starts to become more
    cluttered and cloudy in my head, when i'm soaking in too many books and
    courses... but it's nothing a few days away from it all can't fix.

    i think you're 100% dead on with offering critiques, heck, do them for
    free because it will help you get used to the process of looking
    at letters, seeing where they can be improved, and more importantly....
    showing your prospect that you can help them.

    i've probably landed hundreds of clients... all from offering a free critique.

    and i've spent many thousands of dollars on google adwords without
    landing clients... so in my eyes, the free crits help to build trust, likability,
    credibility, etc... and also with the Cialdini factor of influence... reciprocity.

    When you do a critique for someone, and it really is great value and
    helps them out a lot... they feel it deep down and many times, that's
    the factor that gets them back to you for the fixing of the problem.

    back to eben pagan for a moment, he mentions in his course that
    all marketers should do 1 on 1 consultations with prospects, so you
    can actually start to learn what makes people tick, what
    emotions they deal with, how it leads to their actions, why
    they buy, etc...

    i can personally say that doing critiques, phone consults, etc... it
    didn't make me a better copywriter as much as it made me a better
    client-getter.

    so, even though some may say you're trying to learn or do too much,
    i commend you for wanted to become better at your craft. true pros
    never stop learning...
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    • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
      Originally Posted by shawnlebrun View Post

      hey rezbi,

      I actually commend you for wanting to learn more about the craft.

      can you suffer from info overload? sure, but it also shows me that you're
      willing to continuously learn and get better... which i think ALL great writers
      strive to do...

      ... so, even though some may say you're trying to learn or do too much,
      i commend you for wanted to become better at your craft. true pros
      never stop learning...
      Ah. Someone who gets it.

      It's not about buying more courses and doing more, more, more.

      It's about continually improving all the time.

      Cradle to the grave.

      One thing, though, I'm not looking for any new clients. I'm thinking of critiques because they're easier to do and take less time.

      I'm involved in a couple of businesses (partner in a business that's been already running for four years) and have just been offered a partnership in another.

      And it's all down to my copywriting and marketing knowledge. They know it's worth having me on-board to get the clients in.

      So, as far as writing copy and doing the marketing, I think I'm pretty much set for a few years at least.

      I just want to get better because I want to be the best I possibly can.

      Who knows, maybe I'll take jobs down the road if I'm made offers I can't refuse.
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  • Profile picture of the author JasonParker
    These are my favorites at this time...

    ... David Garfinkel and Brian McLeod's program at Fasteffectivecopy.com

    ... John Carlton's Simple Writing System

    ... Ad Magic by Brian Keith Voiles

    ... Breakthrough Advertising by Eugene Schwartz

    ... Billion Dollar Marketing Secrets by Ted Nicholas

    ... The Secret of Selling Anything by Harry Browne
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    • Profile picture of the author shawnlebrun
      Originally Posted by JasonParker View Post


      ... The Secret of Selling Anything by Harry Browne
      GREAT call Jason... this is simply one of the best books ever written on selling, it's so applicable to copywriting.

      Yet, I'm amazed at how few people have read it. Secret of Selling Anything is one of my top 5 favorite books on selling.

      Gary Bencivenga mentioned it... and another he mentioned that flies under the radar? Obvious Adams... another relatively obscure copy book that very few folks ever mention.

      BTW... Craig Clemens is considered to be one of the top 10 copywriters in the world. that's not my saying... that's coming from other top marketers.

      He usually works based on word of mouth and referral only... which tends to happen when you become one of the best.
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      • Profile picture of the author JasonParker
        Originally Posted by shawnlebrun View Post

        GREAT call Jason... this is simply one of the best books ever written on selling, it's so applicable to copywriting.

        Yet, I'm amazed at how few people have read it. Secret of Selling Anything is one of my top 5 favorite books on selling.

        Gary Bencivenga mentioned it... and another he mentioned that flies under the radar? Obvious Adams... another relatively obscure copy book that very few folks ever mention.

        BTW... Craig Clemens is considered to be one of the top 10 copywriters in the world. that's not my saying... that's coming from other top marketers.

        He usually works based on word of mouth and referral only... which tends to happen when you become one of the best.
        Where can I get the Eben Pagan and Craig Clemens stuff you're talking about?

        Can't seem to find it with a Google search.
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        • Profile picture of the author The Marketeer
          Originally Posted by JasonParker View Post

          Where can I get the Eben Pagan and Craig Clemens stuff you're talking about?

          Can't seem to find it with a Google search.
          One way is to get on Eben's list. Not too long ago, he was actually giving away his copywriting course and some of his other products as a bonus for free if you bought one of his other products.

          Once you're in, you can ask him directly if he still has any copies available.

          He can be quite generous at times.
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        • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
          Originally Posted by JasonParker View Post

          Where can I get the Eben Pagan and Craig Clemens stuff you're talking about?

          Can't seem to find it with a Google search.
          Eben's Print Persuasion is currently on Ebay, it's a collection of interviews with top copywriters including Craig:

          Eben Pagan Top Gun Get Altitude 15 DVD Course Bonus Print Persuasion Frank Kern | eBay
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  • Profile picture of the author videolover7
    Originally Posted by Rezbi View Post

    What would you recommend?
    Find an A-List copywriter who currently holds several controls with the big mailers who's willing to mentor you. And then pay whatever he/she asks.

    VL
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  • Profile picture of the author BrentDotCom
    Of course, I have no idea about the specifics of your individual situation, but after years of reading how-to books on every kind of writing imaginable, I don't know how much more that I can reasonably assimilate. Whenever the urge to expand my knowledge base creeps up, I start writing immediately and the desire for further education is mercifully extinguished.
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