Need a 50 words script for video promotion website !

by bassem
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dear fellow warrriors i am soon lunching a new website for video creation services , for this reason i hired a spoksperson to make short video describing my services but he required me a script of 50 words . thats why i need your helps dear warriors to provide me with a script that is apealing and attractive with call to action in the end for the visitor to order a video , this is the informaion of the service
website: videocreation.royaldoc.com

please i need a script who can convance the visitor to order a service ..

you help is much appreciated

Bassem
#promotion #script #video #website #words
  • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
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    50 words isn't by far enough to get your target market to take your desired call to action Bassem.

    50 words will not convey the proper amount of emotion you need to justify your purchase price, whatever this may be.

    Your video script needs to be as long as it needs to be to convince your potential buyers to take the next logical step.

    What is the reasoning, the logic behind needing this to be said in 50 words give or take?


    Mark Andrews
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  • Profile picture of the author jimbo13
    Originally Posted by bassem View Post

    dear fellow warrriors i am soon lunching a new website for video creation services , for this reason i hired a spoksperson to make short video describing my services but he required me a script of 50 words . thats why i need your helps dear warriors to provide me with a
    This is 50 words. Don't know why you want 50 as MA states but if you really do want 50 are you seriously saying you and the other person cannot come up with that.

    A less than 10 second script?

    I can see why all these Copywriters get seriously miffed now.

    Dan
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    • Profile picture of the author Gail_Curran
      This person has already posted in the main forum about this. You'll notice that they don't mention payment. They want someone to come up with an amazing script for free. Because thinking up words is the easy part, right? No skill required. Why pay for it? :rolleyes:

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  • Profile picture of the author shawnlebrun
    Trying to come up a with a 50-word script that sells someone on your service is actually harder than writing a 30 page sales letter.

    why? because you have to literally prove your claim or promise, cover every single question, objection, etc.... and do it in 50 words.

    Can it be done? maybe... but you better know your market so well that you have an overwhelming hot button trigger point that you can press and they'll jump.

    heck, i wouldn't need a 50-word sales letter if you were selling me the winning lottery numbers, a cure for cancer, or Beyonce's phone number.

    but notice how those all seem too unbelievable to try and get someone to believe that what you have will help them... and do it in 50 words.

    more than likely, i'd use your 50-word video script as part of a 2-step marketing system... where you use the video to get them to call you and then you sell them.

    because what you're trying to do would be like hiring a sales person to go out in the field
    to try and sell something, but limiting what they can say.

    pretty hard to do...
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