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HELP! I need an HONEST critique of my FIRST attempt as an affiliate!

by LoLoGalaxy
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hi, i'm newer than new so i need all the advice i can get!

i put together this blog post, it's a recommendation for an acne product. i'm hoping that some of the more experienced members here can give me their honest opinion this...

will something like this convert?:

Cure Acne Naturally?

i'm excited to get started, but thought it would be a good use of my time to just ask if this is ready to drive traffic to before i waste any money what do you guys think??

any help is MUCH appreciated

thanks a $$$,$$$,$$$!
#affiliate #attempt #critique #honest
  • Profile picture of the author anonymous123567
    Pretty impressive dude, like your style
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    • Profile picture of the author sideserver
      The layout of the website is a bit too plain, IMO. It looks very blog-ish, and that could turn off some people.

      There are newer layouts on blogspot (and elsewhere) that you could look at. I would suggest the following:

      1. Take out "blog archive" and "about me". It distracts visitors and gives them other places aside from your affiliate link to click.

      2. Add 1 or 2 more affiliate links, maybe in the middle of your article.

      3. Add a graphic of the ebook cover you're trying to sell. Make it clickable as your affiliate link.
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      • Profile picture of the author LoLoGalaxy
        thanks a lot! keep em' comin' plz
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  • Profile picture of the author martinkeens
    Personally, I think it talks too much about the stuff that doesn't work and not about what you're telling them does work. Not too bad other than that. I like the fact that it's not crazy long.
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