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Okay, I'm not good at copywriting, that turns leads into buyers...

by TerryLock
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Hi Copywriters,

I am developing my new online service, UserGuidez.com and published a landing page to collect leads last week. However, I'm just a developer and never achieved to write great sales/converting copy.

Could you please review my landing page which can be found here:
Userguidez.com

Any recommendations? Any suggestions? You can also PM me

Wondering your valuable feedback, thanks for your time!

Regards,
Terry
#buyers #copywriting #good #leads #turns
  • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
    Hi Terry,

    Are people who create user guides really looking for the "coolest" way to do so? Is that the sort of language they use?

    An alternative approach for your headline would be to focus on the problems and frustrations your prospects face that your product solves.

    I'd reveal just a little bit about your product and how it works to create curiosity.

    If you've got any proof/credibility elements use one (at least). If you've not, go get some.

    Put your call to action directly above the opt-in box, not below it.

    Give some sort of immediate incentive for readers to give you their email address.

    Have a privacy policy and give your full contact details.

    Don't center justify all your text, and if you must use gray use a darker shade.
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