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An assessment please

by StingGB
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Hi everyone,

After much procrastination I've finally settled on a sales page for my eBook. I am very much in touch with my site visitors, and they trust me, so I didn't want to go for a long page hard hitting type approach. But I'd very much appreciate any comments or suggestions for improvement. My site address is myperfectpitch dot com and click How To Submit Your Book To Publishers in Site Contents.

Thanks, Brian
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  • Profile picture of the author GX8
    Hi Brian

    Hope this will help, I would suggest the use of a logo, its a great domain and would look better with a custom graphic, the site has some fantastic content, I think you need a bit of a more colourful design, and the use of better social share buttons maybe. Great content.
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    • Profile picture of the author StingGB
      Dear GX8,

      Thanks very much for the compliment re the site. Point taken about the logo, I have been thinking about it, and I should push ahead and commission one.

      I'm getting some great reactions from the industry regarding the site. Pages ranking on google, backlinks, I'm already getting 5000 unique's a month after only 10 weeks.

      My main concern is that sales page. Its brand new and I really don't know if I am getting it right. Any thoughts from you or other experienced Warrior's would be very valuable.

      Best regards, Brian.
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  • Profile picture of the author DavidG
    Congratz on being published.

    Maybe a small suggestion is to add more juice in your first bullet section.

    So maybe there is something in your book in the analysis section that you thought was a MAIN factor or factors that contributed to your success, if so then you can say something like "3 things that you MUST do to...."

    Go over this link and read on what Gary Halbert has to say about bullets so you can get an idea and start crafting them yourself...

    The Gary Halbert Letter


    Hope that helps.
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    • Profile picture of the author GX8
      I would suggest taking a look at a premium WP Theme, maybe from elegant themes or woo themes, I'm not an affiliate or connected but I do use thier themes and they are very good. You could always get a logo made on fiverr as well, and you could have a great new site for less than $50
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