First Press Release Suggestions

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I am attempting my first email press release and am hoping for some feedback. Based on a few tutorials I read this is the basis format for a digital press release? Any suggestions?

Contact Information:

NesTides, Inc.
Richard Nestor

NesTides – Florida Edition by NOAA released for Android Mobile Devices


Fort Myers, Florida – Accurate LIVE NOAA tide charts on satellite mapping, FWC fishing Regs and Fish Photo Identification released for Android mobile devices.

Two years of research and development by Florida fishing enthusiast’s results in the most complete, accurate tide chart fishing application Android based mobile application found on Google Play.

Deriving LIVE data directly from NOAA (National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration), the software utilizes the GPS of the mobile device to locate nearby tides stations pin-pointed on a satellite map that is capable of zooming to never before seen satellite detail of any given fishing grounds in Florida.

Key functionality as directed by the beta testers include:
• Advanced tide graphs allow for you to judge the level of water movement for optimal fishing between high and low tides.
• Ability to forecast tides from NOAA by setting date and period for any of the Florida tidal stations.
• Searchable FWC fishing regulations to keep you abreast of fishing rules and limits.
• Photo identification of every fish (inshore and offshore) found in Florida waters.

The application has quickly risen to Google Play’s top tide application offering and enjoys a 5 Star rating. You can view screenshots and purchase the application here:

For more information:
Richard Nestor
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  • Profile picture of the author roger h
    Hi (Richard?)

    Ok, well the PR itself is probably a little short. Try increasing the length by adding more body content, perhaps a couple of 'quotes' from expert users or the developers themselves which attest to the usefulness, quality and accuracy of the product - whatever will inspire confidence to the reader and lend credibility to the product.

    Also, dont forget to Date the PR.

    Hope this helps. Good luck with it.

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