I need advice on my squeeze page!

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Hey guys,

I hope you can help me out...

My new squeeze page is AffilioKing - Dominate Affiliate Marketing

I want to send out a solo ad next week (as soon as I receive the ad copy from my writer) and I really need a well converting squeeze page because I can't afford to waste money at this time.

Please give me some tips to improve conversions!

Thank you so much!
Mike
#advice #page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author banx63
    Hi, although I have never set up a squeeze page like that before, I think it's great. Simple and to the point. I like to use video in mine, not all the time but where I can. Overall though I think this will convert quite well.....


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  • Profile picture of the author The Marketeer
    Try to keep the opt-in box above the fold either to the right or in the middle.

    You could have a stronger headline by mentioning in the headline that you're offering to teach them how to make $8143.60 a month for free.
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  • Profile picture of the author The Copy Warriors
    A little explanation of what they get when they opt in would go a LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG way!
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  • Profile picture of the author MikeDelasol
    When you create a squeeze page .. you are asking for something from the visitor (their name and email). You need to offer something in return . it's all about trade off .. can you add a free gift, a ebook or something that makes the trade off fair .. it's all about perceived value.
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  • Profile picture of the author stemdrea
    Send some traffic to it see how it converts. If it's not converting well add a few bullet points 4 maybe 6 or you might change the headline and try it again. Nobody knows how a page will convert, they might know good copy, but nobody has a crystal ball. So let the market decide they'll tell you if it works.
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  • Profile picture of the author BrianMcLeod


    Do you not see how unbelievable and hypey this headline is?

    Followed by the blinding irony of declaring that your reader is now in the "no-hype" zone?

    Start over.
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    • Profile picture of the author IMNomad
      Look at point 6 - Choosing the Right Verbs (they talk about the word GET)

      The link is the first line in Ricks Post: http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...pywriters.html)

      orig:
      Signup now for your free coaching

      new:
      get unlimited coaching for 30 days (or however long you offer it)

      It's making the user Do Something versus having them GET SOMETHING. Which would you want if you saw this page?
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
    The part I love is you're selling free coaching when you just admitted you're BAF (Broke As F***).

    Go ethics!

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