Opinion on Facebook Page recruiting page

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Hey guys,

I was just wondering if I could get your opinion on our facebook page recruiting page content:
https://www.facebook.com/raykuedu/app_100265896690345

Is there anything that you guys would modify/change?

Thanks!
Donny
#facebook #opinion #page #recruiting
  • Profile picture of the author twersk
    Great. I didn't know you could do that on Facebook. Will send to a friend.
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  • Profile picture of the author kinkarso
    Haha yeah, I recently found that out as well.
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    From a copywriting standpoint it's weak. You'd improve it a lot with a benefit-oriented headline on why people should join your group. Good luck.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ninja Ana
    For me this is great.. all the benefits, requirements and qualities are enumerated and intact in the ads. Keep it up.
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  • Profile picture of the author echotips
    I agree with travlinguy - get a benefit in the headline.
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  • Profile picture of the author nobita436
    You have really done it nice.
    This will be definitely new to the people and they must like it.
    It is really cool.
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    • Profile picture of the author lindamriana
      these simple,clear,and excellent..
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  • Profile picture of the author une
    i wand to do somthing like this on my page to but how /.
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  • Based on concrete studies, your headline accounts for 80 percent of your readers. The better your headline the more readers. I'd spend the time to come up with the best one possible.
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