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Here's the sales letter I wrote (yep, no headline in it - I prefer writing the headline last):
---- Start Sales Letter ----
Most people out there are either hiring people to make a minisite for you or they do it themselves. What you are about to discover, won't make you do any of that. Except a little of do-it-yourself :-)
Guess what - I'm giving you a way to actually have a gorgeous minisite that can give you literally a boost in conversion compared to the traditional minisite people have been using.
You've seen this kind of minisite before:
[Image - ugly minisite]
And you've seen this kind of minisite too:
[Image - beautiful minisite]
What most copywriters telling you about copywriting is king is just half the story. What they didn't tell you that they need a queen to make a powerful combination.
Yes, a good minisite is a website that has good copywriting and good design.
And here's a tip for you - did you know that using a background with your product name on it displayed all over the place can actually damage your sale? Now, I'm sure you don't want your sale to drop just because of some designers' egos right?
That's why I've created a set of templates you can use today to create an extremely conducive environment to sell your product. Yes, it's so good, and I'm sure you will agree if you see just a SMALL SAMPLE of what you're going to get this month.
[Preview]
I think it doesn't give you any fun if I tell you exactly what's happening behind the scene that can increase your sales dramatically. So, I will just let you experience it yourself.
How about if you try it for 30 days, and see if your sales increase? If not, tell me, and I give your money back. If yes, do send a glowing testimonial to put on this website.
You could see that I've got plenty of customers satisfied with what I've been doing:
[Testimonials]
How much does this set of weapon of mass sales cost you? $250? $297? Nope. Not at all. Seriously, you probably are fed up with what those jerks (marketers) who told you how much they spent to create this kind of templates. I won't do that here.
But what I'll do is, I give you a low price, extremely low price that you could afford today and see if the sales go up or down the drain.
Let's see... what you're going to get is 12 lovely templates that could increase your sales literally overnight. You're going to get an awesome 30-day money back guarantee from me just in case if you want your money back. And for all these thing, I will charge you $17.
That's it. It's less than 2 bucks per templates, and I'm sure there are people out there who are selling this kind of thing for over $47 (they say it worth it) but now, you don't need to pay for that. Just get what I have here, and you don't even need to hire any web designers anymore.
Sincerely,
Alex
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