I also know getting pro copywriting advice costs a premium, but my budget is really tied up right now. So the best I can do is give you the program for free if your answer has more substance than, "This is crap! That is all."
I tend to see that from time to time here. And although it’s hilarious to read, it kind of sucks for the OP. :p
But even though some warriors give pretty worthless comments, some of you are very generous and absolute geniuses! (Steve the Copywriter, Andrew Gould, Mark Andrews, just to name a few.) I'm hoping for the latter.
After all, I joined this forum to give help and get help. And I'm banking on the fact that the majority of you ended up here for the same reason.
I'm not afraid of getting ripped apart. I just need more substance. Something like, "This is crap, because... and here's a suggestion...."
Again, I fully understand I'm asking for something can easily run me into the hundreds to thousands of dollars. But my dad always told me, "It doesn't hurt to ask." So here it goes.
Here's the page: Instant Motivation Supercharger
Right now my sales conversion rate is at 1%. Half from my list, half from affiliates.
Keep in mind, I'm in the middle of split testing 6 different headlines. So you may not see the same headline that everyone else is seeing.
Here are the variations:
The conversion goal I’m using for this split test is “Engagement.” Meaning, if they click anywhere on the page, it counts as a conversion.
I’m tracking this instead of purchases, because I think that it’ll determine a winner faster.
So far #6 is the top performer, converting at 50% engagement. The control is #1, converting at 33.3% engagement.
And again, my overall sales conversion is at 1%. I’m trying to get it up to at least 3%. Which I’ve been told is generally accepted as decent copy.
Thanks for taking a look!
Holy crap that was quick! All 5 have copies have been given out. Thank you guys so much for sharing your insight and expertise. Man, I have sooooo much to work on now. I'll work a lot of your suggestions into my next few rounds of testing.
You guys are just brilliant!
If you still want to critique. By all means, please do. I would love to hear more!