PRE checklist or what to ask yourself before asking us for a critique.

by gjabiz
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There is a good STICKY in this forum which gives some good advice on how to write your copy.

But, here are some questions to ask yourself before you ask all of us to offer our advice.

1. WHO is going to read this sales piece?
2. WHERE is the reader coming from?
3 WHY will they read it?
4 WHAT exactly do you want them to do? HOW?

See, the headline, the deck copy the body...the offer, all those things in the list of copy elements found in the sticky are all about the above.

So, before asking us, ask yourself

Where is the TARGETED traffic going to come from? Will I be paying for traffic via PPC, ADs or whatever? What will the cost of this traffic be?

Once a PERSON lands on my sales page, why will they be interested in it? What will the HEADLINE offer them in exchange for their immediate attention?

What do I have to offer which will help this ONE person with their life in some way? How does my offer make life easier, better or provide a solution to their problem?

Why would this person believe ME? What proof can I offer?

HOW can I ease the reader's skepticism about my offer?

BEFORE they buy my product or service, what is their State of Mind?

AFTER they buy my product or service what will be their state of mind and how does that help them?

Consider the answers to these questions, then BEGIN your copy with a headline or opening that directly gains their attention and keeps their attention.

THEN, once you have written your copy, and you have gone over the STICKY above and are able to answer these TWO primary questions, which are in my opinion the most important ones...

HOW is the reader going to find your sales page?
WHAT happens to them IF they do what you tell them to (buy or take further action)?

THEN, you can ask away.

I find it difficult to offer any useful advice to anyone who hasn't done their basic homework and have made a decent attempt to identify their potential customer.

It could be why we see fewer and fewer copywriters offering up critiques, and I speak only for myself here...I don't want to waste my time on someone who is wasting mine by not doing the most basic thing in copywriting...;.

Asking questions of your self, BEFORE asking us.

gjabiz
#checklist #critique #pre
  • Good stuff. I noticed over the last couple of years that some critique requests are from posters making the same errors as in their two or three previous requests. This is a good reminder checklist.
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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      Also once you really know WHO is your ideal people,
      then you can get a better idea where these are best found.

      It could be jv's having them,
      it could be they hang out on some high traffic websites
      which take paid banner advertising.

      It could be they are harder to find and you are able to get them offline.
      Offline you can be creative and do a co-op mailing where you all share the cost
      or even they pay for your costs as well. The other advertisers would be those who also want to reach the same people.

      It all starts from lots of insights on what you know about them and where to
      reach them.

      In my offline business, none of those methods work.

      Just grunt cold calling and walk in's closes sales.

      National retail and hotel chains and one international
      brand are clients from cold calling over the phone.

      I know this is a copywriting section...just pointing out
      what it takes to get sales isn't what many think and want to know.

      Best,
      Ewen
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  • Profile picture of the author sethczerepak
    Good post.

    I was just reading some of the requests for critique and thinking we needed to add these points to the list. Too many newbies start with product knowledge and talking about the product and what it does. Customer knowledge is more important.

    I think if more newbies "got" this they'd not only write better copy, but they'd actually have a product people wanted and which had a chance at selling.
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