Please critique my salesletter (for a product that doesn't exist yet :)
I just completed a "pre-salesletter" (if there is such a thing) for a product that isn't actually written yet. I'm using it to check the level of interest but, if it's sufficient to go ahead and actually write the thing, the pre-salesletter will probably become the actual salesletter.
For that reason, I wonder if any of you fine folks might take a minute or two to offer your thoughts on it? I wrote it all in one sitting, so I'm certain there's plenty to pick at.
The intended market will be the same as the various "food crisis" products you may have seen in the Clickbank Marketplace (I'm not the only one who wanders though there looking for ideas and inspiration, am I? )
Here's the link:
Clean Water Technology - The Water Machine
Thanks!
Tommy.
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