Could I Get Some Critique On New Page
I am not trying to market my services, please don't take it that way, but a lot of the text/copy is actually in pictures which would make moving it all into this thread a problem.
But yeah, I'd really appreciate it if you could give me some tips on improving the compelling part of the copywriting to effectively get my points across more.
Andrew Gould
Cheers,
Winston
The Beginner's Doctor
To your success!