Honestly, I personally feel like it's kinda bad, and primarily I feel like it does't grab the readers attention right away.
Aside from that, what else can I do to improve my sales page? I'm getting people to stay on the site for a few minutes, but the conversions are low, so there is something wrong here.
Any help is appreciated, like I said this is my first time so there are bound to be improvements.
site is: The Thrift Store Treasures