Think this might be best for the copywriting section, think that is more what your asking, more what your needing.

Site looks nice, but of course doesn't mean it's going to sell. The only to know for sure how it's doing is to test it, see how it's converting or not converting. All starts with testing.

I am no copy guru, but I think your copy needs alot of work. Seems your trying to sell the features instead of the benefits. Need selling points, bullets full of benefits, ect. Give them reasons that can't live without your product. What it will do for them.

On a side note, in the title it says 18 strategies, but rest of the copy says 10.

Not sure what the audience is you are trying to appeal to but I see a lot of issues with the copy. Highly recommend you spend some money on a copywriter.

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