How Copywriting Helped Elect The Leader Of The Free World

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Political pundits are dissecting how the Obama campaign won the election for POTUS. They credit a consistent message, old-fashioned door-to-door campaigning and...email copywriting:

Never Mind Social Media. This Was The Obama Campaign's Real Secret Weapon | Commentary and analysis from Simon Dumenco - Advertising Age

"But I digress. And really, I'd rather talk about something else: What did the Obama-Biden campaign get right? Lots of stuff, obviously. One thing we keep hearing about ad nauseam, of course, is that the incumbent team had the edge in social media. Sure, I'll buy that -- or retweet it mindlessly -- but in giving credit to the Obama-Biden team for its state-of-the-art social strategy, we shouldn't make the mistake of overlooking the campaign's mastery of some old-school fundraising and get-out-the-vote tools.

"In fact, for my money, the most consistently compelling outreach tool used by Obama-Biden was email. If you got on either campaign's email list, you basically agreed to be strafed with endless pleas for support, but the Obama-Biden campaign took political spamology to a whole new level -- especially in how it crafted its often-surreal subject lines. Teenspeak, celebrity name-dropping, raffle-prize giveaways, online store discounts, dinner invites -- there wasn't anything the campaign wouldn't try to get you to open its damn spam."
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  • Here are some of the subject lines the campaign used:

    From Obama for America
    Make three calls now- there's no tomorrow
    If you forward one thing....
    Scroll down, then forward
    Forward this: 537 votes
    Your Obama 44 bumper sticker
    Forward this: Republicans For Obama

    From Michelle Obama
    Can you help out?
    Three things you can do right now
    Two simple words
    Final

    From Barack Obama
    The last time I'll ask you this
    How this happened
    Go vote- and forward this

    Here are a few from the Romney campaign:

    From Mitt Romney
    This Moment
    Keep up the good fight
    The momentum
    Thank you

    From Romney For President
    What you're doing is working
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    There is an article in this weeks TIME magazine entitled
    Inside the Secret World of the Data Crunchers Who
    Helped Obama Win
    by Michael Scherer. It's a great
    read from an inernet marketing perspective.

    In the article he writes:
    A large portion of the cash raised online came through an intricate, metric-driven e-mail campaign in which dozens of fundraising appeals went out each day. Here again, data collection and analysis were paramount. Many of the e-mails sent to supporters were just tests, with different subject lines, senders and messages. Inside the campaign, there were office pools on which combination would raise the most money, and often the pools got it wrong. Michelle Obama’s e-mails performed best in the spring, and at times, campaign boss Messina performed better than Vice President Joe Biden. In many cases, the top performers raised 10 times as much money for the campaign as the underperformers.
    Note the number of testing they did for their email campaign.
    They used the data they collected in their subscribers to also
    target ads to them. Marketing at it's basic level and made
    possible by modern technology.

    -Ray Edwards
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  • That's a lot of testing.

    Another little thing I noticed is many of the Obama emails stressed forwarding the message to others.
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  • Profile picture of the author TheSalesBooster
    I signed up to obama and romney's newsletter. I only got mail from Obama, but it made up for romney's lack of mailing...

    Obama's campaign sent me more emails in the past 2 months than actual spammers. It was so bad I actually regretting signing up, but it did make for great research.
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  • Profile picture of the author Marvin Johnston
    I signed up for both emails, and don't have the email counts available right now. But I think they were pretty much about the same although Obama seemed to have the edge in asking for money.

    I kind of wish I had taken the time to do the Flesch-Kincaid grade level score on all of the Obama/Romney emails. But the half dozen or so I did showed the Obama emails at about the third grade level, and the Romney levels at about the seventh grade. The exception in both cases was the contest disclaimers that were at grade 12.

    Did anyone else do the Flesch-Kincaid on the emails?

    Marvin
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  • Profile picture of the author Ross Bowring
    The Obama people got me to send the guy money more than once. With one click ease BTW. Nicely written emails. Simple hooks. Simple language.

    As it said in the article quoted above... I also found myself more likely to open an email from Messina and other campaign honchos, because if it was from Biden or Obama I knew they didn't write it themselves.

    Had the faux Biden done an email about hair-plug recommendations though... I'm opening that one.

    --- Ross
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  • Here are some Biden email subject lines:

    Hey, I've got your deficit right here
    Why does the Romney/Ryan logo look like toothpaste?
    How about this? I don't give a f***
    Three words...crash and burn
    Why are they always talking about Reagan...he's dead

    Oops, those are from my grandmother. My mistake.
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