WE are Still Being Ignored, Is it the Message or the Messenger?

We are cold calling what we feel is our warm market. We make the pitch on the phone, then we say we are going to send a follow up e mail, then NOTHING

Is it our copy, our message, what is stopping people from responding, getting back to us? We offer a free copy of our software, a free sample of our Branding, two opportunities to ask questions, not a nibble.

Is there something wrong with our pitch? I am not the best copy writer out there, but I hope I am not the worst.

This is our copy, what do you think?




I am particularly excited about working with Realtors and Brokers in the Real Estate Industry.

Of all of the different industries and business categories, I picked YOUR industry to launch POP into first.

Why? Simple, it was a “no-brainer”; it’s the perfect fit!

POP’s software platform package, with its weekly ongoing support, communication and Branding capabilities fits in perfectly with the tradition of Realtors thanking their clients after a successful transaction, and then wanting to stay in contact with those clients to build long term business relationships.


POP was developed and built as a hybrid software program, having the ability to thank people for their patronage and then seamlessly offering that same person multiple reasons to stay in contact with YOU, almost indefinitely. Instead of you being the person who wants to stay in contact with a client, it’s the client that will choose to stay in contact with you, a nice change.

POP empowers and enriches people’s lives, this quality makes POP the perfect vehicle to not only thank people for their patronage of your services, but provides that same person with multiple ongoing permission based options to stay in contact with YOU.

POP has the unique hybrid ability to accomplish both of these goals and is an excellent addition to what you may be offering for closing, house warming gifts, as well as offering a unique, innovative way to stay in touch with clients after the close or sale.

Building your brand can be an expensive proposition and one that is difficult to gauge whether dollars going in, can be translated to successful transactions coming out. POP offers the progressive minded Realtor and Broker unparalleled options to build and grow your personal Brand, for pennies a month.

For a free example of our Branding capabilities, featuring your information, click here.

POP and all of our related weekly support tools, opt in web site based marketing and promotional campaigns, can be Branded with your image, contact info, corporate and personal messages. Your personal Branding can be changed on a monthly rotation.

I personally look forward to working with you. During our immediate Launch phase, I will be visiting local Realtors and Brokers in the area outlined below. I hope I can personally meet with you and show you how POP can become an indispensable tool in helping you build and grow your business.

Personal Regards,

Bryan Beckstead
Developer of the Power Partnership Program, POP
Hopeville, Ontario

For a personal one on one meeting to discuss POP
Call me directly, at xxx-xxx-xxxx, or email me.

“Even if you are on the right track, you will get run over if you just sit there.”

For more details about how POP can make a difference in your business, click here

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