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Need KickButt Headline For My WSO - Will Give Product!

by Dennis Cheesman
14 replies
Hey copy dudes and dudettes..

I need a kickbutt headline for my WSO located here:
http://www.warriorforum.com/warrior-...-must-see.html

This is the headline to get people to click and look at the WSO.

I will give a free copy to the best headline for my WSO..

If interested please post here

Best regards,
Dennis
#give #headline #kickbutt #product #wso
  • Profile picture of the author Adaptive
    Hi Dennis,

    It looks like a killer offer. So I'm happy to take a crack at coming up with some headlines to capture the zing:

    Clickbank money machine gives you a new review site every month

    Affiliate marketing monster automates everything for you but cashing your ever-growing commission checks

    Totally turnkey online profit-maker: minisite with niche, product, reviews, articles, autoresponder, and killer graphics all built in

    Reading this headline is the hardest thing you'll ever do in the rest of your IM career

    Minisite magic increases your income every month

    Research, writing, graphics, code: all done for you. Spending your profits: up to you.

    Get a new hands-off IM cash machine in your lap every month

    Regards,
    Allen
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  • Profile picture of the author Kevin Lam
    Allen, I've seen you give good tips on copywriting, so I think you can press out better ones than these.
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  • Profile picture of the author The Copy Nazi
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    ♛ Sensational Clickbank REVIEW SITES going OFF THE RICHTER!! Ker-Ching. Jump on this one campers!


    This'll work Dennis BUT your Landing Page is a Horror Show. Bring it into my shop for this month's Special WSO $97 tune-up - includes FREE Oil-Change & Grease.
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  • Profile picture of the author Adaptive
    Allen, I've seen you give good tips on copywriting, so I think you can press out better ones than these.
    Thanks for the kind words, Kevin. I wanted to get something out there fast... and as you noticed, I was too much in a rush to bring along my bag of tricks!

    I'll take some time to try again.

    Regards,
    Allen
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  • Profile picture of the author Kevin Lam
    You're welcome, Allen.

    I've been holding on to it since I emailed Dennis yesterday evening with it, but I might as well drop my version here. It's more of a re-write of the previous one by Dennis, because I think it points out some of the important elements:

    Discover How ClickBank Review Sites Are Instantly And Perfectly Built To Make YOU Money! Hundreds of People Have Paid A Regular Price of $37 A Month. Take Advantage of Our Warrior's "Save-Money-Make-Money" Opportunity.

    Limited To 50 Warriors ONLY. PLUS You'll Get The "INSANE" bonuses!
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  • Profile picture of the author Kevin Lam
    Oh cool, so Dennis is pretty much using my headline.

    Just fyi, I used "hundreds" because I assumed that many people already purchased. Otherwise, I'd also use "Others...". Good job, Dennis.
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  • Profile picture of the author Dennis Cheesman
    Yes, I was really looking for the thread headline...

    That is what I need to get the people to click to read..

    I tried this one:

    ►► Explode Your ClickBank Profits With These Proven KickButt Review Sites - LIMITED OFFER! ◄◄

    I want something that is going to get them to open and read...
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  • Profile picture of the author Kevin Lam
    Dennis,

    Just use this: The Warrior's "Save-Money-Make-Money" ClickBank Review Site System.
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  • Profile picture of the author Adaptive
    I haven't posted a WSO, is there a particular length limit for the headline?
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  • Profile picture of the author Kevin Lam
    Thanks for the free product, Dennis!
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  • Profile picture of the author Dean Dhuli
    Stunning New "Plug-n-Profit" Clickbank Review Sites -- Making Money From Clickbank Cannot Get Any Easier Than This!
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  • Profile picture of the author maxdog
    Never Pay $37 Dollars for information!
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  • Profile picture of the author Bigsofty
    Ack! The irony!

    "I want something that is going to get them to open and read... "

    Exactly - the prospect has a better idea of what a headline is than the copywriters advising him...

    Lemme go check the WSO.. Needs to be short enough for a thread heading..

    Why is this guy giving away complete profit-pulling websites for $15?


    I'd read it


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