I made sure to comb through the forum to be sure this sort of thing had been done before, and if it was acceptable to every member here. I was happy that forum users who asked for copywriting critiquing of their first sites, not only got excellent criticism but also very helpful advice.
Please I'd like you guys to check out my first copywriting online and rate it if possible. Thank you.
Here's the URL: Who Else Wants the 5-Step Happiness Activator?