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Can you give me constructive feedback on my review page?

by zatarim
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Hey,

I'd very grateful if you could give me constructive feebacks for me review page since it has high bounce rate which is annoying and result in lost ranking in Google for the page keyword looking to rank for.

Truth About Abs Review

Thank you

Zatari
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  • Profile picture of the author mmss2103
    here are some thoughts..
    1. something's wrong the top menu... it spills over to the next line, at lease in my browser & resolution
    2. just a suggestion.. maybe it makes sence to add a logo if you want to make your site look profesisonal
    3. I love the review section - it show that other people like it
    4. not sure that I like this approach in general... it's too soliciting.. I see rigth away that the only purpose of this site is to sell something... which turns me away (subconsiosly)
    5. you can add FB like button and get some likes, it will also add some trust - just an idea
    6. maybe you can add FAQ section - to persuate people who have concens
    7. if I want to buy it - I would be interested to see context of this book,,
    8. I don't trust much web sites w/o normal contact info.. e.g. phone, address, linkedin profile, etc
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    • Profile picture of the author zatarim
      Originally Posted by mmss2103 View Post

      4. not sure that I like this approach in general... it's too soliciting.. I see rigth away that the only purpose of this site is to sell something... which turns me away (subconsiosly)
      can you tell me the right approach for the site especially the home page a bit confused about what the content for the first page should be for my site may be because i am mentioning the truth about abs ebooks in the home page whats your suggestion about this?

      and thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author Freshmorning
    Change the Starting Paragraph, its doesn't sound so convincing.
    Every Sub headings need change, make them more interesting to read.

    thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    Maybe the high bounce rate comes because the page
    takes a very longtime to load. With the first attempt I got
    an error and in the second attempt it took a really
    long time. Not many people would wait around that
    long for a page to load. Look at some of the plugins
    you are using to see how you can speed up the load
    time.

    -Ray Edwards
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    • Profile picture of the author zatarim
      thanks for feedbacks any other great feedbacks are welcome
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  • Profile picture of the author wlasikiewicz
    It just looks like a regular blog post to me.
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