Why You Won't Sell More Stuff, No Matter How Many Critiques You Get Here

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You come looking for magic and walk away with diddly-squat in results.

Why?

2 causes.

1 You are presenting your product/service first.
Commodities get presented first.
$9.99 a kilo for a leg of lamb. $1.50 a cabbage.

The solution is coming up.

2 You are Me Too.
You are not taking into account what other marketers are saying,
or have said before, about their products or services to your prospects.
When a person is in a strong buying mood, he or she will look at about 3 alternatives.
Alternatives are those that have wide differences.
If you are like another and are not the first name that comes to mind for
your features, then you are screwed. Once a name of product/service or company
is top of mind, then you need to travel down another road.

SOLUTION: Ask yourself this question.. "What problem does my product/service solve?".

Then ask yourself, "Is it truly the only one that solves this problem?

If you get a yes, then your next step is to write an ad that will tell the whole story and
have a call to action, then run it in a classified paper, or Adwords.

The problem we have nowadays with the internet, we have unlimited space for virtually free to write what we darn well like. This has caused sloppy sales messages.

Test small in classifieds and in Adwords by changing different appeals.

Once you have settled on the winning appeal through test data,
then you can write a longer ad which expands on the problems,
causes, implications, stack benefits and add a reason for acting now.

This pitch then can be expanded into different forms and media.

If you don't get a yes to the last question,
then it gets more complicated which a deeply experienced marketer
may be able to assist.

Sometimes the kindest recommendation is to kill the project and start again.

Power words and adjectives won't save the day,
and never will when there is a flawed product or service.

Best,
Ewen
#critiques #matter #sell #stuff
  • Profile picture of the author Dennis Gaskill
    Good post, Ewen. I tried to guess what it would be about before I entered the thread, and I missed the mark. I had speculated that you'd say something like, "...you only come here for quick fixes for your broken copy, but you aren't learning from your mistakes."

    Ah well, it's a good thing I don't earn my living as a psychic.
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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      Hey good to see you over this neck of the woods Dennis.

      Best,
      Ewen

      Originally Posted by Dennis Gaskill View Post

      Good post, Ewen. I tried to guess what it would be about before I entered the thread, and I missed the mark. I had speculated that you'd say something like, "...you only come here for quick fixes for your broken copy, but you aren't learning from your mistakes."

      Ah well, it's a good thing I don't earn my living as a psychic.
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    Originally Posted by ewenmack View Post

    If you are like another and are not the first name that comes to mind for your features, then you are screwed. Once a name of product/service or company is top of mind, then you need to travel down another road.
    Maybe you can do like AVIS car rental by admitting that you
    are #2 and that's why "We Try Harder". Seemed to work well for
    them for 50 years.

    -Ray Edwards
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    • Profile picture of the author wesd22
      inane post, OP. what's next, the sky is blue?
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      • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
        Originally Posted by wesd22 View Post

        inane post, OP. what's next, the sky is blue?
        What's obvious to you, me and a few others
        isn't to the majority who ask for critiques here
        because they have those 2 mistakes.

        And often will still soldier on after when
        those traps are pointed out.

        Best,
        Ewen
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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      Good point about Avis and their memorable slogan Ray.

      What we have here on this forum is people
      coming out with products which are to far down the ladder,
      therefore game over for them before the ad is even written.

      The battle for the buyers brain has already been fought and won.

      Best,
      Ewen

      Originally Posted by Raydal View Post

      Maybe you can do like AVIS car rental by admitting that you
      are #2 and that's why "We Try Harder". Seemed to work well for
      them for 50 years.

      -Ray Edwards
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      • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
        Originally Posted by ewenmack View Post

        What we have here on this forum is people
        coming out with products which are to far down the ladder,
        therefore game over for them before the ad is even written.
        Yeah, "I'm 417th, and I've barely tried" doesn't quite have the same ring as the Avis slogan.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Pescetti
    So...

    Are you saying copywriters aren't alchemists?

    We can't turn trash into gold?

    Mark
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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      Originally Posted by Mark Pescetti View Post

      So...

      Are you saying copywriters aren't alchemists?

      We can't turn trash into gold?

      Mark
      Actually a non copywriter did, well almost gold,
      it was money.

      There was an art award in Hamilton NZ
      with a first prize of $15,000

      The winner was a non artist and opportunist.

      He didn't even turn up to set up his masterpiece.

      He phoned up from Berlin asking somebody to grab all the wrapping and trash
      the other contestants put into the dumpster
      and put it all in a heap on the exhibition floor.

      Gave it a swanky name.

      Much to the disgust to the artists, the trash guy pocketed
      15k off them!

      Story here...http://www.3news.co.nz/Losers-compla...1/Default.aspx

      Even trash recyclers have to have a good sales pitch to sell.

      Best,
      Ewen
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  • Profile picture of the author copyassassin
    But Ewen...

    that would require work
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