Critique please? Fitness Niche
Thanks in advance for providing constructive criticism of the following copy of my affiliate page:
[URL EDITED until copy is rewritten.]
I've read the points list in the checklist and done as much as I can. The original website is found by clicking on the order link. My page (URL above) is the affiliate / presell page. The vendor hasn't provided a way to direct link to the product/cart so I'm forced to have to link to his website through my affiliate link instead.
Thanks in advance to all!
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