The landing page is here: https://oilprice.com/premium
Now i'm not the world's best copywriter - and was hoping to get some feedback from the experts here.
I think visually it's okay - but does it make you want to sign up?
It's early days - but the conversion rate is just under 1% which is a little disappointing.
The service really is something else - as we have partnered with one of the most famous energy traders in the world and 2 intelligence companies - one corporate and the other military. I just don't think i've really done the service justice.
If it helps you can see our first sample letter here as an example: https://oilprice.com/premium#
Thanks for any advice you can offer.