Little Help From An "Expert"...
I'm just getting into copywriting and have written some copy and designed a (online) sales page for a business i know.
It's my first attempt at anything like this and i'm just trying to get some experience using real world businesses.
If there are any experts with 5 minutes to critique a newbie at this then it'd e greatly appreciated. All i ask is that if you want to say thats its sh*t, then let me know WHY its sh*t.
The temporary address is Sales Page
Just post whatever your thoughts are here.
*Of course compliements are always welcome too...
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