I have a site that is doing very, very poorly (under .05% conversion). I have tried to mercilessly tweak the copy so it works but there's obviously something important I'm missing.
First of all, some statistics. The reader spends an average of 4:30 on the page, and about 8% click the order link.
You can check out my copy at:
.iscover the Secrets to Giving Your Partner Multiple, Mind Blowing Orgasms, and Have Her Beg You For Sex:.
Anyone have any ideas?