My thoughts on VSLs vs. written sales letters

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I'm sure you've seen the proliferation of VSLs coming online.

And there's a reason, they work and work well.

You can bet that savvy marketers test the daylights out of them.

But the truth is, some beginning marketers can't pony up the extra cash
to have their sales pitch put into video.

And to you, I say don't worry about it.

Get the best written sales letter you can get, put it up to test, hopefully
get some cash flow coming in, and save up to have a video made.

Because let's be honest... the copy is usually the 3rd most important
thing... after the list/audience/target market and your offer.

A crappy sales pitch using a great offer to a hot list will do better than the world's best sales letter to a sh*tty list.

In other words... VSLs are just another medium to deliver your message.

The medium (video vs. written) won't make the sale, the message does, as long as it's to a targeted audience who wants what you're selling.

Look, humans are humans, and we all buy for our reasons. It's simply human nature.

So persuasion can take place through a written sales letter just as much as video.

Again, the way you deliver the message isn't as important as the message itself, as long as it's to the right audience.

So again, start with written if you can't afford a video letter, then when you can, test that against the written and roll out the winner.

But for those marketers I've been chatting with lately, asking whether they should do video or written... my answer is always the same: test both.

But just remember that the message matters more than the way it's delivered. and the list/audience matters even more than the message.

Give me an incredibly persuasive written letter over a poorly written video sales letter any day....
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  • Profile picture of the author osiedle
    Thanks for the insight. I agree that video sales letters need to be really well planned to make a positive impact on potential customers. It's worked well for me
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  • Profile picture of the author Jason_V
    Shawn,

    There are a lot of people who prefer written sales letter to a video sales letter (myself included) and a lot of people would prefer an entertaining VSL over a static sales letter. As was mentioned in another thread the best thing you can suggest to your client is to give the option of both. Put the VSL on your page but if someone clicks the X to leave the page, have the page switch to a written sales letter and a pop up box asking them "if they really want to leave."

    This gives both type of people what they want. It would be nice if someone would even test a link under the video saying something like "Don't want to watch the video? Click here for the non-video version"

    I know there are people who love video for everything, but others want to read, try to give people both options any time you can.

    I do understand what you're saying though. Get the written copy, make sure your traffic, your offer, and your copy are awesome, then invest in a video if you don't have the money for the VSL up front. Very sound and practical advice.
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  • Profile picture of the author cindytsmile
    Personally, I dislike being forced to watch a video. I like to read and decide, or at least be given the option.

    Just my 2c.
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  • Top Secret (only for the good people on this here copywriting forum).

    ...One of the key reasons why your audience won't read your ordinary sales letter is -

    It looks like hard work! 29 PAGES OF DENSE COPY is no fun to read.


    So just spread the epic masterpiece out. Use lots of space.

    No paragraph more than 4-5 lines long.

    Only use 2 maybe 3 reader friendly fonts.


    Make it a dream to read. Not a nightmare.


    Steve
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  • Profile picture of the author Robert_Rand
    This make sense. You can always get started with a sales letter if cost is an issue.

    Originally Posted by shawnlebrun View Post

    So again, start with written if you can't afford a video letter, then when you can, test that against the written and roll out the winner.
    However, in response to this:

    Originally Posted by shawnlebrun View Post


    But for those marketers I've been chatting with lately, asking whether they should do video or written... my answer is always the same: test both.
    I have two simple questions for you (or anyone else)

    1) Would you advise TV infomercial producers to test running a silent scrolling long form sales letter vs. a full blown infomercial?

    2) How many successful long standing (consistent month in and month out for a min of 6 months) 7 figure business can you name right now that are running on a long form sales letter? And how many can you name using a VSL?

    An exception to this is the free trial offer. In that case, you really are riding on the strength of the offer, and a short sales letter or short video can work well.

    But if you actually want to sell something... A good VSL is going to blow away a good sales letter. If anyone has experienced different results... then your video just wasn't good. Point blank.

    If someone asks me that same question and isn't restricted by a limited budget... there's really only two options: VSL with copy or VSL without copy.

    And yes, it does matter a lot. Because often even a slight increase in conversion rate is what allows you to make it work on certain traffic sources - which allows you to scale the offer... which changes everything.

    Of course, I'm talking about creating a long term sustainable and scaleable business here - where the VSL is the entire sales mechanism. Not a launch to warm traffic where the sales are reliant on personal celebrity or credibility. If that's the case, then yeah, it probably doesn't matter as much.
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    • Profile picture of the author Jason_V
      Originally Posted by Robert_Rand View Post

      This make sense. You can always get started with a sales letter if cost is an issue.

      But if you actually want to sell something... A good VSL is going to blow away a good sales letter. If anyone has experienced different results... then your video just wasn't good. Point blank.

      If someone asks me that same question and isn't restricted by a limited budget... there's really only two options: VSL with copy or VSL without copy.

      And yes, it does matter a lot. Because often even a slight increase in conversion rate is what allows you to make it work on certain traffic sources - which allows you to scale the offer... which changes everything.

      Of course, I'm talking about creating a long term sustainable and scaleable business here - where the VSL is the entire sales mechanism. Not a launch to warm traffic where the sales are reliant on personal celebrity or credibility. If that's the case, then yeah, it probably doesn't matter as much.
      I said it before in another thread and I'll say it again, if I go to a product and a video starts playing and there's nothing else on the page, I will X out of the page immediately. The smart marketers will have the page switch to a written sales letter with a popup box asking if I was sure I want to leave.

      I don't care how "awesome" your VSL is, I'm not watching it, period. I know better to think that I'm a "special snowflake." So, I know I'm not the only one who will not watch a VSL.

      I understand there are people who prefer them, and maybe I'm in the minority. However, if you don't offer people a sales letter to read in lieu of just the VSL you're losing sales, point blank.
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      • Profile picture of the author Robert_Rand
        Originally Posted by Jason_V View Post

        I said it before in another thread and I'll say it again, if I go to a product and a video starts playing and there's nothing else on the page, I will X out of the page immediately. The smart marketers will have the page switch to a written sales letter with a popup box asking if I was sure I want to leave.

        I don't care how "awesome" your VSL is, I'm not watching it, period. I know better to think that I'm a "special snowflake." So, I know I'm not the only one who will not watch a VSL.

        I understand there are people who prefer them, and maybe I'm in the minority. However, if you don't offer people a sales letter to read in lieu of just the VSL you're losing sales, point blank.
        To give your personal preferences more weight than those of the marketplace as a whole is egotistical and foolish.

        Moreover, it isn't about preferences - it's about what people respond to.

        I understand many people here do share your sentiments - the voice of stubborness and ignorance - and that's fine. Say whatever makes you feel good. Scream your opinion from the rooftops.

        But in the real world, success doesn't work the way a forum popularity contest does. In fact, it's more like the complete opposite.
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        • Profile picture of the author Jason_V
          Originally Posted by Robert_Rand View Post

          To give your personal preferences more weight than those of the marketplace as a whole is egotistical and foolish.

          Moreover, it isn't about preferences - it's about what people respond to.

          I understand many people here do share your sentiments - the voice of stubborness and ignorance - and that's fine. Say whatever makes you feel good. Scream your opinion from the rooftops.

          But in the real world, success doesn't work the way a forum popularity contest does. In fact, it's more like the complete opposite.
          So, on one hand you say: "To give your personal preferences more weight than those of the marketplace as a whole is egotistical and foolish."

          While if you bothered to even read what I said which was: " I know better to think that I'm a 'special snowflake.' So, I know I'm not the only one who will not watch a VSL."

          Then you go on to say: "I understand many people here do share your sentiments [bolded for emphasis] - the voice of stubborness and ignorance - and that's fine. Say whatever makes you feel good. Scream your opinion from the rooftops.

          You can't even go a full paragraph without contradicting yourself multiple times. Either I'm a narcissist who is "the only one in the world who doesn't like video" or "many people here do share your sentiments"

          Which one is it?

          Lastly, you accuse me and others who hold this view as "stubborn and ignorant" Yet, you're the one who would allow sales to slip through your clients hands over a simple popup box and redirect to a written sales letter?

          No, my friend, you by this very post have just proven who is truly stubborn, ignorant, and also very contradictory (I hope your copy is cleaner and not full of contradictions as this post)



          Have an awesome day!

          Edit: Oh, silly me, no wonder I was attacked with such vigor, the sig line says it all: "See how whiteboard animation video sales letters..."

          No vested interest here at all folks: "Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!"
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