THE most important part of your sales letter

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I made a post a few weeks back about using the Pareto principle
in my business. Some call it the 80/20 principle.

And then this morning, I read a post by Mal titled "The Death of
the 30 Second TV Spot"

I started thinking about how it all ties in to the book I recently
read, by Michael Masterson called "Great Leads"

(If you're a copywriter, it's definitely worth grabbing for $10 on
Amazon)

Anyways, there's a passage in the book....



And it got me thinking about how it tied in with Mal's
post.

You've got literally seconds to hook someone in.

If you don't get them in 1 to 2 seconds with your lead,
they're gone.

So without a doubt, your headline/subhead/lead
accounts for 80% of your results... simply because
if it's good, people read on and possibly buy.

If it sucks, they don't. No sale.

Well, with Mal's post... it really does take
about 5 seconds to get someone either interested
or not.

And there's also a passage in Great Leads where a lot of
other copywriters mention how the lead or intro to
your sales letter/ad is the most important part.

They all say, in some way, that the lead (20%) of the letter
will account for 80% of your results....



Bottom line, whether it's a written sales letter,
video, or TV commercial... make sure the first
part of it is as gripping and persuasive as possible.

What I'm doing now, in my business, is making sure
my list/target market is spot on... make sure the
offer is solid...

but instead of busting my a** on writing very long
copy, I'm now focusing 80% of my time on the
headline/sub/lead... making sure it's as solid as
possible and could almost sell the product itself.

And then just making sure the rest of the letter
doesn't destroy the work I put into the lead.
#important #letter #part #sales
  • Profile picture of the author copyassassin
    Originally Posted by shawnlebrun View Post

    THE most important part of your sales letter
    Shawn,

    I love 80/20 and agree that 80/20 effects copy as well.

    However, 80/20 is fractal by nature.

    Meaning, there is 80/20 layered on 80/20, layered on 80/20.

    Your relationship with your list is the true 80% that matters.

    I find that people read my writing, not because it's great, but rather because of my relationship to my readers.

    They love me (some hate me, too).

    In other words, I get more than 1-2 seconds to "hook" my readers.

    How much more, I can't say.

    But, people let me all the, "Adam, I love reading your stuff. Even if I'm really busy, I'll stop what I'm doing, and read it." "Adam, you charge more, but I love working with you. It's worth it"

    More simply put, a strong relationship with your readers overcomes many of the attention issues.

    Now, of course, we're all judged my "dollars in" vs "dollars out", and better written copy ALWAYS creates more "dollars out".

    But, just in terms of "attention", relationship deserves to be mentioned in relationship to attention.

    For example, if Rick Duris writes or responds to a post, I'll read it. CopyNazi, Ewen, Mike, Maxipad, and a couple of others.

    Just another layer to add.

    Adam

    p.s. An important question to ask your copy clients is the nature, strength, and mutual love the list has to the product creator, and vise-versa.
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    • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
      THE most important part of your sales letter - headline/sub/lead
      Your relationship with your list is the true 80% that matters.
      Apples and oranges.

      If you're driving cold traffic to a sales piece, there is no prior relationship.

      Alex
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      • Profile picture of the author copyassassin
        Originally Posted by Alex Cohen View Post

        Apples and oranges.

        If you're driving cold traffic to a sales piece, there is no prior relationship.

        Alex
        Agreed.

        However, most sales in the IM world are fueled by affiliates, where there is a relationship.

        Even "cold" searchers on google trust google for providing the "best search results.

        In other words, if an info-product is on the 1st page, that gives it an implied endorsement.

        WSOs are damn near all affiliate sales. Relationship applies there as well.

        When testing copy, Google Adwords is the gold standard.

        When I pay for copy written for me, I usually contract it to 2 or 3 people, then split test the copy using cold search (sometimes display network) from Adwords.
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        • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
          Originally Posted by copyassassin View Post

          Agreed.

          However, most sales in the IM world are fueled by affiliates, where there is a relationship.

          Even "cold" searchers on google trust google for providing the "best search results.

          In other words, if an info-product is on the 1st page, that gives it an implied endorsement.

          WSOs are damn near all affiliate sales. Relationship applies there as well.

          When testing copy, Google Adwords is the gold standard.

          When I pay for copy written for me, I usually contract it to 2 or 3 people, then split test the copy using cold search (sometimes display network) from Adwords.
          You'd be surprised how many marketers drive cold traffic to sales pieces via direct linking (no prior relationship, no affiliates).

          They use display ads and non-Google PPC networks.

          It's a huge number... certainly not trivial by any means.

          For example, advertising.com (AOL's PPC network) offers billions of impressions per day.

          Alex
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  • Profile picture of the author shawnlebrun
    Adam, no doubt that's a GREAT point about having that relationship with your list.

    I remember sending out emails in the past that had literally NOTHING to do
    with an offer or trying to sell something to my list.

    It was honestly sent out because I had been feeling down, feeling sad
    for some reason, and so I just sent out an email to my list telling
    them I felt like sh*t, here's why I feel like crap, here's what I'm going
    to do about it, etc....

    Anyways, I tied it into something like taking action, or something
    like that. It was almost 14 years ago when I did this, but the point
    is, that one email got more responses from my list than anything I
    had ever written.

    and it was simply because of the relationship. and sure enough,
    those who were on the fence about my products TOLD me they
    bought after I sent that email.

    They could tell i wasn't just out to sell something to them, but that
    I was a real person who had their best interests at heart.

    So I agree 100%.... your relationship matters immensely.

    In fact, that's why I rarely even open emails anymore these
    days, because most of it seems to be the same regurgitated
    hyped-to-the-gills stuff you see on clickbank.

    but when Matt Furey or Ben Settle send one out, I'm all
    over it because of the relationship they built.
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