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Please critique my site

by raindog777
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Hello everyone,

I am looking for an honest critique of a new site I am working on. I would appreciate any feedback you have. I'm new to warriorforum but have been following for awhile and finally decided to jump in. My site is:

nomorelightbills.com
#critique #site
  • Profile picture of the author wbnetwork
    Raindog, make your link a hyper link so people can click on it. Most people won't copy and paste the link into their browser. Just put http:// in front if it.
    BTW, i think it looks pretty good
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  • Profile picture of the author raindog777
    Thanks for the feedback Anthony. I'm new and I haven't reached my post limit yet so I can't add links. Looks like I better get active and start sharing
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  • Profile picture of the author Crazy J
    Hi RainDog,

    I like the site, especially your color choice, very appealing and easy on the eyes.
    I would suggest a subscription form to some kind of e-course or Newsletter on the right hand side below or above the Adsense ad-block.

    You might make a few cents on the Adsense but gather subscribers will be more profitable long term.

    Hope that helps,
    Cheers, Smiles and Success,
    Crazy J
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    • Profile picture of the author bethrobinson
      Pretty template.

      The site might look more "real" if you change the title to No More Light Bills instead of blurring the words together. You can add the .com if you like.

      Your about page is still on the wordpress default. It needs updating.

      Does your disclaimer need to be that obvious? If your template allows you to I'd remove the disclaimer, privacy policy, and terms of use from your main navigation tabs and just leave them in the text menu.

      Instead put an articles tab or your categories and maybe a tab that goes directly to your affiliate or a review of the affiliate. That way it's visible even from the article pages.

      Nice job putting the hook and main affiliate link above the fold. I clicked on it. If you're going to have the save 80% line, though, you might want to change the color. The grey kind of blends in.

      Just my first impressions,
      Beth
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
    This is a copywriting forum.

    There is no copy on your page.

    See the disconnect here?

    Probably not the best place to get advice.

    -Dan
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    Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.

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