B2B Sales Page need a critique please
Before you view it let me give you some background on the target audience. This is a B2B service that is focused on business owners, CEOs, CFOs, and any high level decision maker. The business size would be between $1.5M and $100M+ in revenues.
So don't review it as a B2C sales page.
Just a quick mention on the layout. I broke the pages up only because I'm hoping not to overwhelm the reader and get them to read more of the content. For me I can't stand long sales pages. And since I am a business owner and other owners I have known tend to be very pragmatic and analytical we don't like our time wasted. With that said, I will be testing both ways.
Any tips or comments about the layout or wording would be great. No criticism is to harsh.
Thanks in advance.
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