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Need advice on Facebook Ads copy

by sean83
1 replies
I set 5 Facebook ad campaigns, promoting Six Months From Today, I directed the ads to this Facebook tab page I setup as a presell.

Here was the best performing ad, it didn't do to well, getting around six clicks.

Could anyone give me advice on how to improve this copy.

Thanks Anyone
#ads #advice #copy #facebook
  • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
    Several things...

    1. Headline doesn't make sense on first reading. If your prospects have to figure out what you mean, not good.
    2. Phrase "Learning instant paid traffic" in body copy is awkward.
    3. Word "mentors" in body copy is weak. Find a more powerful word or phrase.

    With Facebook ads, it's best to test the elements of the ad in this order: picture first, headline second, and body copy third.

    Alex
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