I just finished setting up a new sales page and my brain is mush. Mind taking a look at the sales page and OTO page and letting me know what you think? Please keep in mind that I'm not a professional copywriter, this is just something I whipped up real quick.
I'm open to all CONSTRUCTIVE suggestions, but please don't just tell me 'It sucks" or "Come up with a better headline" without at least giving a suggestion on how it could improve and why you think so.
Here's the link, but beware because it's live and will process a order if you submit one. But that's not the reason I'm posting here, of course. I really could just use some fresh sets of eyes.