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Is This The Most Cost Effective Way To Have Your Restaurant Full at Lunch?
"I'm sure you understand the importance of customers-not unlike most restaurant owners." If you'd like to participate in a tested and proven yet very simple program to get more customers, please read this carefully.
The most cost effective advertising (city) has to offer is now available. Use this to gain new customers and increase your annual sales by at least 10%, and best of all you get 1 free month to see for yourself.
We get you more new customers and ways to make them regulars and more visits from your existing customers,
In other parts of the country this has proven to increase the average restaurants income by well over 20%, while decreasing advertising costs by over 55%. Statistics have shown that 91.5 % of advertising placed by small business owners cost more than the income generated from the sales. These numbers end today.
"Look, I know you're bombarded with advertising offers. You're busy. You don't have time to waste. But what if this actually works? Imagine if you had a surge of new business from one cheap little marketing campaign. Besides, what do you have to lose by calling? So pick up the phone right now and call (name & phone #) to start your 1 month free trial with no obligation to continue.
P.S. Move your marketing to another level. There is nothing like this in the market. If you like to have your restaurant full of customers at lunch, try our 1 month free trial with no obligation to continue by calling (name & phone #)
P.P.S. We are giving away restaurant gift cards in our contest to local shoppers. We will be buying gift cards to give away from 40% of the restaurants who take advantage of our free 1 month trial.