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Style blindness? really need your help

by webtyrant
2 replies
Ok.. so we've had a shot at getting the copy for

WebTyrant.com

it's doing ok..

Someone else.. we trust.. looked and said.. it's ok.. good.. then rewrote everything.. it's doing better..

What do you think?

there's been so many of the same styles lately.. is it good. bad.. I'm going style blind..

There really is no sale.. I want to test the ripple effect and get feedback, before deploying the strategy across my other sites..

Si
#blindness #style
  • Profile picture of the author David Raybould
    Hi Simon.

    So you're looking to get as many
    opt ins as possible from your site?
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    Killer Emails. Cash-spewing VSLs. Turbocharged Landing Pages.

    Whatever you need, my high converting copy puts more money in your pocket. PM for details. 10 years experience and 9 figure revenues.
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    • Profile picture of the author Dean Dhuli
      Hey Simon,

      I believe the problem with your page is
      that it contains no specific details about
      your product.

      To be frank, your opt-in page can be used
      for any other similar product also.

      There was a time when you could throw up
      a page with some abstract copy and a couple
      of bullets and EASILY get people to opt in.

      But things have changed since then.

      Now people demand more information even to
      just give their email address.

      So IMHO, it will really help if you rewrite your
      copy making sure you reveal more specific details
      this time around.


      Hope this helps,

      Dean.
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