Whose voice is on the audio... a narrator or the legends themselves?

I didn't see that explained in the SL.

Alex

AnneE, AnneE, AnneE,

you need to apply the "does anybody give a shit?" to your offer. And, sadly, I think you'll find that the answer is "No".

But if you were to offer the WSO crowd "How to make a million dollars overnight...in your pyjamas" that would work.

But really...nobody gives a shit about this.

I'm finding a complete disconnect between the headline

"Do you wonder if any of these WSO’s will live up to its claims?"

and then you're selling motivational quotes?

Complete disconnect.

And looking at the responses on the WSO... you got
a lot of "wow, that's nice"

but that means nothing. have you sold many of these?

if not, it could very well be what Mal said, no one really
wants to part with even $5.00 if they feel they can get all
of this stuff online, for free.

I'm more realistic than most, maybe, and probably agree with Mal,
in the sense that most of my best selling products have been
ones in which I just channeled desire and the urge to solve a big
problem.

here, there's not a lot of "I need this product to solve a problem
or fulfill a desire"

If it were me, I'd cut ties and move on, but that's me.

If you continue, you'll want to find a REALLY fast way,
right in the lead, to show how investing $5.00 in quotes will
help them ______?

I don't know... stay motivated, keep moving along so you take
action, which in turn makes money? you gotta line it up real
fast to how it helps make money... since that's what most
are here for.

Anne,

Believe me, I completely understand how big it is... I was listening to Zig Ziglar, Brian Tracy, Tony Robbins, and others when I was 18, so I couldn't agree with you more about mindset. It's everything.

BUT... the "cut" ties part was on this specific copy piece targeted to the market you were targeting.

I like the newer lead much better... where you're getting right to the "mindset = money" part.