This is a quick message.... You Don't Need Our Approval to Make Money with Your Copy. You need only to follow a few guidelines:
1 start with the biggest benefit you have that is your headline
2 relate to their pain/problem
3 amplify their pain/problem
4 introduce the solution/ and yourself
5 prove the solution with proof
6 strong call to action
that's its really, if your copy does these things well, in a easy to understand way ( like on a 7th grade level) then your copy is fine. the key isn't the copy, its who you are presenting the copy too. is the group a starving crowd? if not then chances are no matter how good the copy is you are not gonna make to many sells. if they are really hungry they will eat the first good option they see. be that option.