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Which copywriter did this one?

by fxprofitmountain
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The (current control) video sales letter for PaleoBurn is a very long (52 minutes).

Anyone here have any idea who wrote it?
#copywriter #diet #video sales letter
  • Profile picture of the author Cool Hand Luke
    That control has been up for a couple of years now and is still killing it. I'm not sure who exactly wrote it but I can tell you they followed Jon Benson's 3X VSL Formula to the letter... not only is the structure exactly as Benson teaches, but some of the wording is pretty closely swiped from example scripts in the course.

    Anyways, while it's not revolutionary or particularly unique, it's still cool to see a 52-minute VSL that converts so well.
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  • Profile picture of the author davemiz
    pretty sure its steve grey's offer.... he had homemadeenergy... one of the biggest offers on CB
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    • Profile picture of the author fxprofitmountain
      Originally Posted by davemiz View Post

      pretty sure its steve grey's offer.... he had homemadeenergy... one of the biggest offers on CB
      Chris Haddad (re)wrote the copy for homemadeenergy - so do you think Chris did this as well?
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      • Profile picture of the author Cool Hand Luke
        Originally Posted by fxprofitmountain View Post

        Chris Haddad (re)wrote the copy for homemadeenergy - so do you think Chris did this as well?
        Chris did Power4Home, not Homemade Energy.
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        • Profile picture of the author fxprofitmountain
          Originally Posted by Cool Hand Luke View Post

          Chris did Power4Home, not Homemade Energy.
          Right. Of course.
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  • Profile picture of the author stuzilla
    52 minutes?

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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      Originally Posted by stuzilla View Post

      52 minutes?
      Unless you are a DIY'r who has had a guts full
      of his electricity bills!

      Best,
      Ewen
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      • Profile picture of the author fxprofitmountain
        Originally Posted by ewenmack View Post

        Unless you are a DIY'r who has had a guts full
        of his electricity bills!

        Best,
        Ewen
        The diet ad is 52 min, not sure about the home power ad...
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  • Profile picture of the author davemiz
    fxprofitmountain - cool hand luke is correct. you had the wrong offer.

    and the one he did isn't doing so hot right now compared to previously.

    but yes, i'm pretty sure its steve greys offer. dude is an awesome marketer.
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