So is Anyone an Expert in Making Banging Sales Pages?

12 years ago

Go to the Copywriting subforum in this very forum!

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Eliezer F 12 years ago

Originally Posted by Jason Kanigan

Go to the Copywriting subforum in this very forum!

I already hired a Copywriter i'm talking about as far as design gif images etc.
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Carlsbadd

12 years ago

you can get some help at leadpages DOT net. they have some proven leadpages that are drag and drop

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Eliezer F 12 years ago

Originally Posted by Carlsbadd

you can get some help at leadpages DOT net. they have some proven leadpages that are drag and drop

My sales page is already finished I just need it polished and banging salable and convincing more convincing. Futures Hedge Trades
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- BrianMcLeod 12 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by Eliezer F
  
  My sales page is already finished
  
  You don't know how right you are, sadly...
  
  You're here for a reason have you ever made some nice money trading only to give it back a few days—or even a few hours—later?
  
  In the next few minutes you'll get access to 'the cream de la crumb'.
  
  Hunt that "copywriter" down and kick squarely in the nuts.
  
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  Eliezer F 12 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by BrianMcLeod
  
  You don't know how right you are, sadly...
  
  Hunt that "copywriter" down and kick squarely in the nuts.
  
  Changed it to "In the next few minutes you'll get access to my personal discovered trading strategy."
  
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Des Lau

12 years ago

Your main headline is missing a question mark

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Eliezer F 12 years ago

Originally Posted by Des Lau

Your main headline is missing a question mark

Quotation statement suggestion
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Devid Farah

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Eliezer F

So is anyone an expert in making banging explosive sales page i'm in trouble need a little help with my first one.

Dude the guys that create "banging explosive sales pages" are the ones that charge from $5,000 to $30,000... can you afford them?

Lol... listen, you need to hire a real copywriter with a track record of PROVEN results.

Who wrote this sales page?

Your actual sales page is unreadable and the design is really bad. Makes me feel i wanna close your website immediately. You need a total restyling.

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Eliezer F

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Devid Farah

Dude the guys that create "banging explosive sales pages" are the ones that charge from $5,000 to $30,000... can you afford them?

Lol... listen, you need to hire a real copywriter with a track record of PROVEN results.

Who wrote this sales page?

Your actual sales page is unreadable and the design is really bad. Makes me feel i wanna close your website immediately. You need a total restyling.

I'm looking for solutions I actually like the design Peter Bernnan [Quality Copywriter on here] did the Copy.

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Mark Pescetti

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Eliezer F

I'm looking for solutions I actually like the design Peter Bernnan [Quality Copywriter on here] did the Copy.

The copy is horrible.

Start over.

By the way...

Never sell to other traders - unless you can prove you know more than them.

As is, you haven't overcome ANY of the common objections you'll run into when traders read your copy.

You're better off targeting the work from home crowd.

Although...

I don't see ANY value here - for anyone...

Mark

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Eliezer F

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Mark Pescetti

The copy is horrible.

Start over.

By the way...

Never sell to other traders - unless you can prove you know more than them.

As is, you haven't overcome ANY of the common objections you'll run into when traders read your copy.

You're better off targeting the work from home crowd.

Although...

I don't see ANY value here - for anyone...

Mark

Your personal opinion but it is it actually does work no gimmick to get your money it actual works and I know not to target traders.

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Eliezer F

12 years ago

Like I said I have a product service that works and I need a sales page to reflect that any solutions and if this copy sucks can you all show me examples of some good copy.

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BrianMcLeod

12 years ago

Originally Posted by Eliezer F

Like I said I have a product service that works and I need a sales page to reflect that any solutions and if this copy sucks can you all show me examples of some good copy.

Here's a great pitch I watched earlier today.

Exit out of the VSL if you just want to read the copy.

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Eliezer F

12 years ago

Originally Posted by BrianMcLeod

Here's a great pitch I watched earlier today.

Exit out of the VSL if you just want to read the copy.

Motley Fool Stock Advisor: THE $2.2 TRILLION WAR FOR YOUR LIVING ROOM BEGINS NOW

You have any recommendations on who can write a good VSL?

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fxprofitmountain 12 years ago

Originally Posted by Eliezer F

You have any recommendations on who can write a good VSL?

Daniel Scott is one who has a great reputation for financial sales letters, look him up on this forum... I am not the only one who has noticed how others seem to heap praises on him.

Here is one thread where he is recommended
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- IndiForce 12 years ago
  
  Ask Mark Pescetti if he is willing to write your copy. He is your man!
  
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  Enfusia 12 years ago
  
  I know I'm a little late to the party on this one.
  
  However I have 2 things.
  
  1. Your copy is not speaking to the right audience and the writer has little idea who your ideal customer is. This is painfully obvious in many areas of the page.
  
  2. The flow is so disjointed that there is not just a lack of the mesmerizing factor here reading it is actually abrasive.
  
  Just my opinion.
  
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KingOfContentMarketing

12 years ago

Creme de la crumb.

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