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11 years ago

I NEED A BRILLIANT EXPERT to do a quick once over and give me some final advice.

This sub forum is frequented by experienced and knowledgeable copywriters. Any one of us could help you, no doubt.

You're brand-spanking new here and have contributed exactly zero value to the Warrior Forum.

Two questions: 1) Why do you call us your "brother" 2) Why should we help you?

Alex

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daavid3

11 years ago

Originally Posted by Alex Cohen

This sub forum is frequented by experienced and knowledgeable copywriters. Any one of us could help you, no doubt.

You're brand-spanking new here and have contributed exactly zero value to the Warrior Forum.

Two questions: 1) Why do you call us your "brother" 2) Why should we help you?

Alex

1. I called myself a brother. 2. Just because I am new here doesn't mean I don't deserve help. You were also new here at 1 point I am sure.
and how do you know I am not willing to financially compensate? and I have a ton of internet marketing experience and in depth knowledge. I have done some big things in this space and am always giving back to those that give to me.. So why shouldn't you help me?

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Alex Cohen

11 years ago

Originally Posted by daavid3

1. I called myself a brother. 2. Just because I am new here doesn't mean I don't deserve help. You were also new here at 1 point I am sure.
and how do you know I am not willing to financially compensate? and I have a ton of internet marketing experience and in depth knowledge. I have done some big things in this space and am always giving back to those that give to me.. So why shouldn't you help me?

Entitlement mentality never ceases to amaze me.

Alex

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Mark Pescetti 11 years ago

Originally Posted by Alex Cohen

Entitlement mentality never ceases to amaze me.

Alex

I want to see it because I'm curious why he isn't refining the copy with his copywriter. Oops, the jig is up.

If somebody paid me, didn't test it, then went on the WF to pay (or not pay) other copywriters for advice... well, it wouldn't sit well.

Mark
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ThomasOMalley

11 years ago

In other words, I expect you to do a brilliant job for free...everyone one jump and help out our brother...lolol.

Plus, as he says, he still making great money with the product but he has a tight budget...sound familiar anyone?? LOL

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daavid3

11 years ago

Originally Posted by ThomasOMalley

In other words, I expect you to do a brilliant job for free...everyone one jump and help out our brother...lolol.

Plus, as he says, he still making great money with the product but he has a tight budget...sound familiar anyone?? LOL

LOL - this project is over budget.. It is a business.. I am willing to put a certain amount in to get more back. Just because I make a $&@^ ton of money doesn't mean every project I do has an unlimited budget. Seriously are you guys children. If you nothing to say keep calm and move on..

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AnabelleFlorida

11 years ago

I'm curious to see the video and I would be willing to offer some suggestions (if necessary). But if you paid a competent copywriter, everything should be fine. Please understand that I won't make significant changes without compensation.

I have to be honest though ...

I don't like the implication that there are only men in here.

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daavid3

11 years ago

Originally Posted by AnabelleFlorida

I'm curious to see the video and I would be willing to offer some suggestions (if necessary). But if you paid a competent copywriter, everything should be fine. Please understand that I won't make significant changes without compensation.

I have to be honest though ...

I don't like the implication that there are only men in here.

Anabelle! Thank you so much for you valuable input on my VSL and I am really glad that you liked it!

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11 years ago

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max5ty

11 years ago

Originally Posted by daavid3

(I know its awesome - me and all of my friends made and still are making amazing money using it daily.)

I am at a really tight budget

Hmmmmm..........

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Mark Pescetti 11 years ago

Originally Posted by max5ty

Hmmmmm..........

Yup, talk about contradicting yourself.

If you and your friends make so much money, why are you on a tight budget?

#makesnosense #bs

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- daavid3 11 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by Mark Pescetti
  
  Yup, talk about contradicting yourself.
  
  If you and your friends make so much money, why are you on a tight budget?
  
  #makesnosense #bs
  
  mark
  
  1. I am over my original budget for this project. Its a business things have budgets.
  2. I don't want a copy writer to ask for ridiculous sums
  
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daavid3 11 years ago

Originally Posted by max5ty

Hmmmmm..........

I can show you my stats for today
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Mark Pescetti

11 years ago

Fair enough. Wy don't you just post the copy - if you're looking for a critique?

If the copy really is good... and little tweaks are all that's necessary, should be pretty painless. I'll take a look if you're not willing to put yourself in the line of fire.

Mark

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AnabelleFlorida

11 years ago

Mark,

I don't know Daavid3 personally, so I have no idea why he hasn't gone back to his original copywriter, I didn't ask. I will tell you that whoever wrote the copy for his VSL did a really good job. I was impressed. Having said that, let me share a story with you ...

I wrote copy for an author who was about to launch his non-fiction book. I wrote for his website, I gave him a small campaign for Facebook, Twitter, Email (to be sent out to his list), and a Press Release. I was paid well and we worked on it and worked on it and worked on it.

I had other other clients to take care of, so after making sure he was okay with everything, I told him I had to move on to other projects. Knowing that he would probably get in touch with me again for more tweaking, I told him I would most likely be available for more changes (if needed) in time for his launch, but I would need more compensation, which was more than fair.

You know what he did?

He vanished.

I noticed later that some of my copy had been tweaked. The changes were inconsequential, so whatever.

My point is that sometimes a copywriter has to move on, or has to take care of other obligations.

There's only so much a copywriter can do for some clients.

I have no idea, but maybe something similar happened here.

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daavid3

11 years ago

Originally Posted by AnabelleFlorida

Mark,

I don't know Daavid3 personally, so I have no idea why he hasn't gone back to his original copywriter, I didn't ask. I will tell you that whoever wrote the copy for his VSL did a really good job. I was impressed. Having said that, let me share a story with you ...

I wrote copy for an author who was about to launch his non-fiction book. I wrote for his website, I gave him a small campaign for Facebook, Twitter, Email (to be sent out to his list), and a Press Release. I was paid well and we worked on it and worked on it and worked on it.

I had other other clients to take care of, so after making sure he was okay with everything, I told him I had to move on to other projects. Knowing that he would probably get in touch with me again for more tweaking, I told him I would most likely be available for more changes (if needed) in time for his launch, but I would need more compensation, which was more than fair.

You know what he did?

He vanished.

I noticed later that some of my copy had been tweaked. The changes were inconsequential, so whatever.

My point is that sometimes a copywriter has to move on, or has to take care of other obligations.

There's only so much a copywriter can do for some clients.

I have no idea, but maybe something similar happened here.

What happened was I did pay my copy writer very well. (I think) He did exactly what I asked of him however, I as the project was coming to an end I didn't feel he had that much sales letter writing experience or maybe he was losing interest in my project. Either way Thank you Anabelle for helping me out and giving me your priceless opinions and edits. I will be PM'ing you for copywriting work if you are available.

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Mark Pescetti

11 years ago

Good job Anabelle!

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