Writing my first ever sales letter - please help~!
I am writing my first ever sales letter offering a video
conversion service and I'd like to hear your thoughts
about it!
I'm still writing it so... any suggestions would be
greatly appreciated!
PS -- I'm new to writing copy... so, be gentle
Here's the link (didn't want to fill up this section of
the forum with the whole letter):
http://www.warriorforum.com/test-for...r-service.html
What do you think? I'm still writing it and saving
changes as I go along.
Edit: Please help - I would sincerely appreciate it!
Asher
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