I'm working with a client on their self storage website in Phoenix Arizona - a very competitive area. The client has copy on the page that they feel is good for SEO. I doubt anyone reads this copy, but I'd love some suggestions on how to make it better and/or clean it up. Copywriting isn't my strong suite, but it is something I'd like to learn more about.
Here's the Phoenix self storage page: Phoenix Self Storage Facility - American Self Storage | Self Storage Units