8 {{ upvoteCount | shortNum }}
8 {{ upvoteCount | shortNum }}

Please review my sales copy

by cup243
7 replies
Hi, for the project I am about to launch I have a faq/sales copy in which I want to tell the reader what the program is all about, how it works, etc.

Can I get someone to give me his opinion on it? (I would PM it to you).

Is it properly written in a natural english way? (I am not english).
Does it do the job of explaining what it's all about and how it works?
Most importantly, does it convince the reader to want to join the program?

Thanks
#copy #review #sales
  • Profile picture of the author ASCW
    You should post it here. That way other's can learn from the advice as well.
    Signature

    Site being revamped.

    If you want help with copy stuff, pm me.

    Cool.

    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[8484422].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author cup243
      Originally Posted by ASCW View Post

      You should post it here. That way other's can learn from the advice as well.
      Ok I will put it here, please give me an opinion based on the questions I asked above.


      [deleted]
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[8484547].message }}
      • Profile picture of the author cup243
        Good or bad?
        {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[8487642].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author shawnlebrun
    Originally Posted by cup243 View Post

    Can I get someone to give me his opinion on it? (I would PM it to you).
    Thanks
    Reminds me of the sign I used to have on my tree house door when I was 10 years old... "no girls allowed cause they have cooties"...

    There are some great women writers here too...
    Signature
    MILLION Dollar Copywriter Offering Written Sales Letter or VSL Script Worth $5,000 - Just $500!
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[8488560].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author dreamdriver
    Do you still need any help?
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[8489602].message }}
    • Profile picture of the author cup243
      Originally Posted by dreamdriver View Post

      Do you still need any help?
      I do. What's on your mind?
      {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[8489808].message }}
  • Profile picture of the author svedski
    I suggest you read a book on copywriting before you attempt to write it yourself.
    You know, just to get the basics down.

    Check the sticky here or just go buy either "Tested Advertising Methods" by John Caples or "How to write a good advertisement" by Victor Schwab.
    {{ DiscussionBoard.errors[8490495].message }}

Trending Topics