1. People respond to specifics much more readily than generalities.

"improve your quality of life" and "FREE tool" are meaningless. Too abstract.

Tell your prospect exactly what he's getting.

2. The submit button says, "Let Me Know". Not good. Something along the lines of "Get Your <whatever it is> Now" would be much better. People like instant gratification.

3. As a whole, the squeeze page is confusing. It talks about some unknown whatever that's launching soon. And yet the email capture is about a free tool.

My suggestion... get some basic direct response marketing education before continuing your project.

Alex

Give Ebook, software and get better opt in rate

You need to come up with a bigger benefit for your prospect.

The improve your quality of life thing. Big yawn. The let me know thing. That's real weak. You need a bigger call to action. Why they need to sign up right now.

Bill


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Freddie...

You're in Scranton, huh. Home of The Office. Not too far from me.

Hard to know where to direct you or assist without more info about what you're doing.

What are you offering people? What's your credibility to offer the solution in the first place?

These answers are important if you want to get good direction and focus from this thread.

--- Ross