I'm posting here to ask for some feedback on a short sales letter and order page I've written, at this address:
(Sorry I cannot make it a direct link - I'm a newish member, and need to post more before I'll be allowed to post direct URLs.)
This is promoted to people who have signed up for an email-based, algebra minicourse, described here:
Subscribers currently get one email lesson per day for five days. Each email encourages them to go to the above link; this email course has been alive for about one week, and so far, about 10-15% of all active subscribers visit it each day.
The copy itself has only been live for about 24 hours, and has had 12 visitors and no sales so far, at the time I'm posting this.
Thanks every much everyone who is able to help! Even short comments are appreciated, if that's all you have time for.