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Who can I pay for a VSL copy critique?

by Cool Hand Luke
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So I've got a video sales letter script for a new fitness guide which I *think* is solid....

Yet the problem is that I'm so close to it, and have spent so much time with it, that I really think an outside perspective is needed to make sure I'm on track before moving forward with video production.

I'm not going to post it on an open forum for privacy reasons, so I have to ask: Can you recommend a VSL copywriter who does critiques, either free or paid?

It would be a huge bonus if they were in the fitness niche too.

Thanks in advance for any suggestions you can offer.
#copy #critique #pay #vsl
  • Profile picture of the author Sean Fry
    Hit up David Deutsch. He gives a mean critique.

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  • Profile picture of the author davemiz
    put it up, throw some traffic and test it.

    only way to know.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Pescetti
    Luke, you've been around here long enough to know who to reach out to.

    But knowing your rep...

    Test the copy first. I'm sure it's worthy of some traffic being thrown at it.

    Then...

    If it doesn't convert at the level you want or expected, you'll have data to bring into the conversation when you get the copy critiqued.

    Don't even tell the copywriter you hire the numbers it drew (right away.) Reveal those number AFTER the copywriter gives you his or her feedback.

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    • Profile picture of the author Cool Hand Luke
      Originally Posted by Sean Fry View Post

      Hit up David Deutsch. He gives a mean critique.

      Welcome!
      Thanks Sean, David is undoubtedly out of my budget for a critique but seeing his page just reminded me to review his swipe file which I haven't seen in a while and I always glom some solid insight from.. Cheers.

      Originally Posted by davemiz View Post

      put it up, throw some traffic and test it.

      only way to know.
      True, I'm 90-95% sure it's solid and going to work out well, but you're right; I just need to do an ugly-style VSL and send a few thousand qualified leads it's way.

      Thanks Dave and btw LOVE the new IID whiteboard video, I think it'll work out really well for you.

      Originally Posted by Mark Pescetti View Post

      Luke, you've been around here long enough to know who to reach out to.

      But knowing your rep...

      Test the copy first. I'm sure it's worthy of some traffic being thrown at it.

      Then...

      If it doesn't convert at the level you want or expected, you'll have data to bring into the conversation when you get the copy critiqued.

      Don't even tell the copywriter you hire the numbers it drew (right away.) Reveal those number AFTER the copywriter gives you his or her feedback.

      Mark
      Thanks Mark, and yeah, you're right; it really is at the testing phase by now. I like your idea about getting some numbers before asking for a critique too.

      Cheers for the insight fellas.
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  • Profile picture of the author davemiz
    ya.. just dont be scurrd.

    whip it up fast, throw it up and see what happens.

    if it bombs, then re-asses.

    thx dude. hope the numbers hold (crossing fingers) LOL... worked my ass off on that vsl copy....
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  • Profile picture of the author MagneticKopy
    Daniel Levis gives INCREDIBLE critiques.
    I've had my work critiqued by him a couple of times.
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  • Profile picture of the author thedanbrown
    Yaa I think your best bet is to test it out with 1000 clicks or so and see how it converts
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