Having John Carlton Review Launch Copy?

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I am about to launch my first info marketing product. It's a niche I've worked in for over 5 years offering a "done for you " service. I know my clientele, who my best affiliates are, the problems my product solves from A-Z.

I have read a lot of Dan Kennedy material and bought John Carlton's Kick Ass Copy Writing course. i feel my copy is decent, but not as aggressive as it should be.

A one hour consultation with John is $2,500.00. I need 9 additional sales to cover the expense of the consultation. With his credentials, I see this as a no brainier.

If I go this route, I will have all copy ready, from squeeze pages, prospect email marketing series, affiliates marketing series, sales pages, bonuses for pressure stacking, and everything else I can pull together.

Does anyone here have experience with John's one hour consultation? I like his style. I feel I learned more from his one "Kick Ass Copy Writing" course for 99 bucks than over $1,500 I have spent with various other systems.

Why hope when I can drastically increase my odds of conversion straight out of the gate? I know I will still need to split test, but with John's experience, I feel it's a must.

Any experience or feedback is greatly appreciated.
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  • Profile picture of the author maximus242
    I think you should split test first
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    • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
      If you've got the 2.5 k then I'd recommend
      getting John to find the blind spots you can't see.

      I've run across guys who have run out of money
      because all the money spent on traffic
      didn't show a return.

      If they had paid for a review from a pro
      first, then they would of increased their odds
      of not only getting their money back but profiting
      from it.

      Best,
      Ewen



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  • Profile picture of the author Johnny12345
    In my view, that would be an insane waste of money.

    Why?

    Because you're not ready for it.

    Before you go to Carlton, your copy should be far better than just "decent." It should already be excellent.

    What happens if he says (as I fear he will) that your copy is low-grade dog food? Unless he's also going to rewrite it for that fee, you'll have wasted your money.

    What will you do then? Have it rewritten and go back to him for yet another $2,500 consultation?

    In my opinion, before you go to him you need excellent copy that has been split tested and refined.

    At that point -- if you still think you need his advice -- at least you'll be in a position to benefit from it.

    John
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    • Profile picture of the author rollingse
      Thanks for the replys.

      Ewen and John,

      I can see both points. My thought process was on track with Ewen. I would hate to waste money on traffic when a consultation could drastically increase my conversion.

      John, I can see your point too. I understand the importance of attention grabbing headlines, what problems my product solves, hooks, calls to action, building value, delivering an unbelievable offer followed by a 100%, 365 day money back guarantee.

      Maybe "decent" wasn't an accurate description, but neither is great.

      With the consultation, I have the ability to send all material in advance for review, so I'm not wasting the first 30 minutes showing what I have in place. I can also record the consultation. After the consultation, I get a follow up email.

      I'll ponder this over the weekend.

      Thanks again,

      Eric
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  • I don't if you've heard of Alan Forrest Smith?

    I've been coached and mentored by him and he is in the same league as John.

    Both came online around the same time.

    He might give you time for a little less of an investment if u tell him I sent u.
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    • Profile picture of the author rollingse
      I'll check him out.
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  • Profile picture of the author shawnlebrun
    Personally, being coached by John was one of the best investments I had ever made in my business....

    BUT....

    I already had a few years of testing my sales letters under my belt. My time with John was spent trying to get to the next level... it is NOT worth it if you're sorta new, or haven't gotten some feedback to your site, or tried sending some traffic, etc...

    John talks fast and he gives out a shitload of value... BUT a lot of it will probably go right over your head if you're not at a level where you can understand it, implement it, apply it, and know exactly what he's talking about.

    If it were me, I'd use some of that money on traffic, to get some valid real world results before investing in John's consult.

    That way, you can talk about what's worked, what didn't, some of your results, what you used for traffic, etc...

    I just think you'll get more "bang for your buck" if you've gotten some real world results and feedback from sending traffic and being in the biz a while.

    If you're at ANY point in your career where you're not pretty seasoned, or have some experience, or have some real world results... I just don't see it worth dropping 2k on John right now.

    When you're ready to go to the next level, then by all means.

    But an hour consult with John isn't going to magically solve your problems... which I've talked to some marketers and they think it will be the solution to their woes.

    Nope, you'll still need to understand it, apply it, test stuff, and see what works.

    I agree, John's course is probably one of the most valuable I own... but there's a time and a place for the $2,500 consult. If you have a shitload of money to spare and invest, then it probably isn't a huge deal.

    But if you're like most entrepreneurs who are bootstrapping it, I'd invest some money in traffic and getting "dirty" in your biz before calling Carlton.

    Test out the copy and see what happens... at least that way you can tell John "I've tested it with 5,000 clicks and nothing"... or "I tested it with 5,000 and made X sales"

    Try out a few different headlines, some new leads, etc... get some real world results on your own and take it about as far as you can.

    Then, that's when I'd invest more with John or other's who can take you to that next level.

    Unless you're at a certain "seasoned" and experienced point... going with John or other top-tier coaches may result in a lot of stuff going over your head.

    I had a six figure business that I wanted to take to 7 and beyond when I started reaching out to guys like John, Rich Schefren, Eben Pagan, etc...

    It all made so much more sense... because I had some real world experience under my belt and could relate better to what they were telling me to do.

    If I had made that big investment in them earlier... most of my reaction probably would have been "Huh?"
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    • Profile picture of the author rollingse
      Originally Posted by shawnlebrun View Post

      Personally, being coached by John was one of the best investments I had ever made in my business....

      BUT....

      I already had a few years of testing my sales letters under my belt. My time with John was spent trying to get to the next level... it is NOT worth it if you're sorta new, or haven't gotten some feedback to your site, or tried sending some traffic, etc...

      John talks fast and he gives out a shitload of value... BUT a lot of it will probably go right over your head if you're not at a level where you can understand it, implement it, apply it, and know exactly what he's talking about.

      If it were me, I'd use some of that money on traffic, to get some valid real world results before investing in John's consult.

      That way, you can talk about what's worked, what didn't, some of your results, what you used for traffic, etc...

      I just think you'll get more "bang for your buck" if you've gotten some real world results and feedback from sending traffic and being in the biz a while.

      If you're at ANY point in your career where you're not pretty seasoned, or have some experience, or have some real world results... I just don't see it worth dropping 2k on John right now.

      When you're ready to go to the next level, then by all means.

      But an hour consult with John isn't going to magically solve your problems... which I've talked to some marketers and they think it will be the solution to their woes.

      Nope, you'll still need to understand it, apply it, test stuff, and see what works.

      I agree, John's course is probably one of the most valuable I own... but there's a time and a place for the $2,500 consult. If you have a shitload of money to spare and invest, then it probably isn't a huge deal.

      But if you're like most entrepreneurs who are bootstrapping it, I'd invest some money in traffic and getting "dirty" in your biz before calling Carlton.

      Test out the copy and see what happens... at least that way you can tell John "I've tested it with 5,000 clicks and nothing"... or "I tested it with 5,000 and made X sales"

      Try out a few different headlines, some new leads, etc... get some real world results on your own and take it about as far as you can.

      Then, that's when I'd invest more with John or other's who can take you to that next level.

      Unless you're at a certain "seasoned" and experienced point... going with John or other top-tier coaches may result in a lot of stuff going over your head.

      I had a six figure business that I wanted to take to 7 and beyond when I started reaching out to guys like John, Rich Schefren, Eben Pagan, etc...

      It all made so much more sense... because I had some real world experience under my belt and could relate better to what they were telling me to do.

      If I had made that big investment in them earlier... most of my reaction probably would have been "Huh?"

      Shawn,
      Thank you for sharing. I was leaning toward the consultation. I have several swipe files for sales pages, headlines, bullets, and closes, but haven't launched the product.

      His "Kick Ass Course " is simplistic and eye opening. It seems to be geared more toward the long copy sales letter and I like that. I assume a link to the sales letter would be offered within the free report or the following day in an email.

      I see others using an email sequence process - Opt in to create interest, first email to bond by sharing who they are and how they created the process or whatever their service is, next email - social proof that their service product works, then the sales letter. This is more of a launch process.

      I see benefits to both. If you were launching a new product, which method would you prefer?

      Any recommendations on other copy writing courses or writing email copy would be appreciated. I ordered one of John's recommended books by Gary Halbert today.

      Thanks again,
      Eric
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      • Profile picture of the author Harlan
        I've one of John's top students.

        I've hired him many many times to look at my copy.

        But John is going to look way beyond the copy.

        If you wrote your own copy, it's probably going to suck.

        You don't need John for that.

        But if you want to take a one hit wonder (maybe) and turn it into a 7 figure business, well the hour will be worth every penny.

        The way you look at copy is not the way John is going to see it.

        Time with Carlton? Worth every penny.

        But if you wrote your own copy - get someone else to look at it first to get it over the "it's crap" level.

        And John isn't available to write copy any more.

        The old man is mostly retired. ;-)
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        • Profile picture of the author rollingse
          Originally Posted by Harlan View Post

          I've one of John's top students.

          I've hired him many many times to look at my copy.

          But John is going to look way beyond the copy.

          If you wrote your own copy, it's probably going to suck.

          You don't need John for that.

          But if you want to take a one hit wonder (maybe) and turn it into a 7 figure business, well the hour will be worth every penny.

          The way you look at copy is not the way John is going to see it.

          Time with Carlton? Worth every penny.

          But if you wrote your own copy - get someone else to look at it first to get it over the "it's crap" level.

          And John isn't available to write copy any more.

          The old man is mostly retired. ;-)
          Thanks Harlan. Makes sense. Why try to go from a Camaro to a Ferrari, when a Vette is a huge improvement and will save me a lot of cash.....
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  • Profile picture of the author rollingse
    Who do you guys recommend?
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  • Profile picture of the author rollingse
    To everyone that replied, thank you. Over the last few days I have been researching copy and I have a LOT to learn. I've ordered several of the books mentioned above and started making swipe files of many of the elements in the "Copywriting checklist" posted as a sticky above as well as swipes of copy written for other industries.

    No wonder there is so much bad copy out there....just getting the basics together is a lot of work before one word on a sales page is written.


    Eric
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  • Profile picture of the author shawnlebrun
    Honestly... John's course gives you all you need to know to create copy that's good enough to put out there and test.

    After all, the WORST version of your copy will probably be the one you first put out.

    John's course does a great job at giving you what you need to create a winning sales letter.

    So why not just use that to create your first version... test it out and THEN invest in your continuing education.

    Honestly, if you keep investing in copy books right now, you may start to suffer from info overload... and worse, paralysis by analysis.

    Meaning... you're taking MORE time reading about copy than you are putting it together, getting it out there, and testing it out.

    Again, if you have John's course... he gives you a few starter templates.

    That's good enough right now... create your copy and get real world feedback WHILE you invest in other books, read them, and immediately APPLY what you read.

    I've been learning copy since 2001.

    I wrote my first sales letter around that time, and did it after reading one copy book.

    Then, I put it out and got real world feedback and results. Initially, it sucked and I made less than $50 a week the first month or two.

    THEN I'd invest in a new copy book, read it, apply what I read, and would make changes to my copy. That $50 a week grew to $50 a day, then $500 a week, then $500 a day, and then $5,000 and up per week.

    I feel that if I had bought a ton of copy books right off, and tried to read them all before writing copy, I probably would have felt overwhelmed... and probably would have procrastinated a bunch.

    But I read one book, put my first sales letter out and started getting results and feedback, and then invested in all the copy classics over time.

    I've probably read and gone through 50 books and courses on copy... but all were one at a time, after I had read one, applied what I could, and only then moved on.

    I just don't want to see you get overwhelmed with too much reading and study... when the real learning comes from putting your first letter out and getting real world feedback.

    If you had never read about copy, I'd say you have to do that first, or you're wasting your money.

    But if you have John's course, you have all you need for your first good ad/sales letter.

    From there, once you get it out and circulating... then you can continuously invest in your copy education.

    That's my thoughts, anyways...
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